10/10

wow You've done AN INCREDIBLE JOB! You're an awesome writer believe me! I'd read Arabesque, boy how much I loved it and wanted more from you. I came across no novels but then I came across this, I was merely fascinated by the title cos I'm a huge Evanescence fan but while reading it and the song playing in my mind, it just seemed incredible.

You're JUST AWESOME! I want more stories PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

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Wow, this was amazing! But so depressing!
Sometimes depressing is good, though. In writing I mean. Not in real life.

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I loved this. Truly, especially with the letter at the end.

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no, ron! wrong answer!

not what i was expecting... argh, what happened!? if the school is still going, that must mean nothing too bad has happened.

the letter was beautiful, btw ;)

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What's amazing about this is that Ron, in the 7th book, really does have some serious issues with those feelings of being second best and there they finally come to light - but here, you address them before then. Now, I don't think Ron would ever ever every betray the trio, but this is still a great piece. Good job!

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Wow... that was really good. I just think the letter could have been more well written. You know, use a better saying then "head over heels" but really fantastic

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I have never felt more sorry for Ron. He's my favourite character and although I can hardly see him working for the Dark Side, I think you did a great job with this one-shot, CelticKisses. It touched my heart. Keep writing great stuff! :)

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I'm sorry about the loss of your belongings...I hope you're able to get things back together.

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i definitely had to read this when i saw the title because "Everybody's Fool" is one of the best songs ever. this was an amazingly fantastical story xD i absolutely loved it. it's definitely one of my top 5 favorite stories. (:

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Very powerful writing. Oh, no. How could they get it so wrong?

Amazing piece. Keep writing.

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oh geez thats writen so well and its so good nice work

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Nice story. Not much of a Ron/Hermione fan but well done =).

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I cannot find the words to describe the emotions this story brings forth. I can only say that I love the song you chose, I get this story 100% and now I need a tissue. Good work, going onto my favourites list.

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OMG THIS IS AWESOME I REALLY LIKE IT KEEP WRITING-HERMIONEGINNYLUNA

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Really good One-shot ... wonder what happened after he went to the Dark Lord... 10/10

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loved it!
omg was so greatt
10/10
as usual

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wow. have u seriously ever considered writing a real book, or something, with the articulation and passion and thought-evoking arousal of the senses that just sort of seems to flow across my screen (and my mind!)???. you should...lol, i would read read it. seriously. omg make your own characters and write a random short story and publish it and instead of your name put CelticKisses and it would be great. i love your work and i love your style and i cheer for your talent; there is no better way to hone it than what you are doing. lol. 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, my dear! It is true; I am in fact working on an original piece of fiction and once it is complete and I find a publisher (which I am determined to do) I will be announcing the name it is published under and it will mention CelticKisses so all my readers know its me and where it came from and how wonderful this site is ^_-

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=[ so sad! that was really really good! when Ron was walking down to the forest and he was talking about there being nothing left for him I thought he was going to kill himself! I was like "don't do it!" so I was shocked when he joined the Death Eaters loved this soo much but it was really sad

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aww amazing really sad

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Well that was terrible depressing...I loved it...Intresteting with the song lyrics tied in, very fiting actualy... Well done.

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Whoa! Thats a very amazing story. I love it.

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Oh wow. That is one of the best fics I've evre read. This rocks! It si so tragic! I am going to add it to my favorites right now!

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This story is very touching. I felt.. I can't find words but the end was like... eh I come back later when I can explain myself better.

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Aw, that was really sad ='( But beautifully written and the lyrics inbetween made it even more special. I'm happy it didn't end like this in the books, though. Nice job, I really enjoyed it =)

10/10!

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YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL THIS IS TO TRAGIC AND I'M ALMOST CRYINGG!oh its very good except for the tragedy so go ahead and make that sequel

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