I'm totally loving!!! U hav to update soon!! And I hope u get that banner u requested soon!!! I'm gonna read your other story!!! xxxAuthor's Response: Lol thanks, hey and tell as many ppl as you can! enjoy! Cya Report Review
A very intriguing opening! The jumping around to different points of view was a little distracting, though. There has to be a way to integrate all the parts together so the flow isn't interrupted, because the story itself is a good one. Keep writing!Author's Response: Yeah ive tryed to stop doing that but putting breaks with those little symbols. Cya Report Review
Just checking it works!Author's Response: Yay 4 me! Report Review
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