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Erm...the language could do with some work and you may want to make the plot a bit clearer. You could get someone to beta read your work. Report Review
i loved it jen, it ws wickd. it got a bit confusing but it was really good!! lvin it :-)Author's Response: i need ppl to tell me wot is wrong with my writing style and how to improve as i am writing my own novel lol thankies for the review. Report Review
omg! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
Uh-oh. I think Voldemort will not be please.
If u need a banner 4 your story, I'd like 2 do it.Author's Response: hello
yeh please id love to have one!!!!! hehe i have no idea how to do them!!! please tell me tha u think of the res of it when iy is updated!!! thankies
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wait- so ginny is voldermort's daughter? confusing much. anyways, good chapter, but a little short.Author's Response: lol yhe i know its a little short i didnt have much time to do it in lol thankies for reviewing nyway Report Review
hey! i love it!!! it's very mysterious.Author's Response: thankies, i wanted to make the first chapter rather... well i am not used to writing this stuff so if u can tell me if it rather crap id wud apreciate it thankies agen Report Review
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