Wow! This is the most descriptive story I've ever read; you use about five adjectives for every verb! Although this makes it drag on a little, and distracts from the main storyline, this is a very good piece of writing. I wish it had been a story, not a one-shot :-) Report Review
oh. so good! love it!! cant wait to read the sequel!!! Report Review
How Did Harry "die"? Is Voldy Gone?Author's Response: Oh, this is a followup story from another story, and it explains how he dies there. But I'll just tell you really quick: he faked a suicide. Report Review
Hi! I was on the hufflepuff forums and saw you who hatesharrypotter.net story amd it sort of directed me to her. This is so deep and sad and sweet and just amazing, so now I'm going to stop rambling and read the sequel! Amazing storyAuthor's Response: thank you thank you thank you! this is definitely my favorite story ive ever written. and its probably the best thing ill write. XD Report Review
Wow. That was really good.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
You should go get a publisher and publish a book. you are really great! Please please please keep writing more!Author's Response: ...
wow. uh, thanks?
(You know that I've actually been wanting to do that? XD My friend's mom is a writer, so I've got some connections there.)
But, wow! Thank you so much! Report Review
That is really well written! Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
He need all of his friends
Hey, it's me again! For a first angst, you did a good job. You got the emotion across to the audience without going overboard. *applause* Author's Response: Oh... -facepalm- I'll go fix that. XD
Thanks, I'm very wary of angst, since its something I'm not very good at. (I have trouble writing something completely humorless.) Thanks again! Report Review
Very, very good. I love how well you described everything. I could clearly imagine everything going on in the story. I have no complaints.
GenAuthor's Response: Thanks! This is for sure my favorite piece of fanfiction that I've written. Report Review
aahh,wheres the rest of teh storie??
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www.piczo.com/---harrypotterAuthor's Response: ... there is no rest of the story. Report Review
I reall like your opening paragraph. it captivated me istantly. I thought that there would be no way you could keep up that form for the entire story, but you did. and it was amazing. truely amazing. I also like fact that harry burned his, and ginny hid hers. that was brilliant. your transitions were nice too. even tho they could be considered abrupt by some, i think they made sence to do them as u did. For your first angsty fic, this was absolutely the best angsty fic ive read on this site. honestly. Great job.
a welll deserved 10/10Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks! I never thought it'd be this good. ^_____^ Thank you so much, again. Report Review
Hmmm.very good! Interesting and it makes you want to read it. =D
Going to my favorites.
8/10Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Wow... I don't know what else to say. Just, wow, wow, wow. That was absolutely incredible. I can't even say what was incredible about it. It just gave me the shivers.
So yeah, I liked it. I'm really glad I found you here as well as on the forums. I have a feeling I'm really going to enjoy keeping up on all your stires. you're going on my favs right now.Author's Response: Hah... Yeah. I get that response a lot. This is usually the story I show people when I tell them I write fanfiction. Good shivers, I hope?
Aw! HUG TIME! -huggles- I love being favorited. Gives me that warm, fuzzy feeling inside. Report Review
How sad, I hope they find eachother. Great job it really was like nothing I have ever read:)Author's Response: Thanks! I never knew I'd get so many compliments on this story. Report Review
OMGSH. I am speechless. I love it when i find a story that simply blows me away, as this did. Thank you so much for the priviledge of reading this. Author's Response: o.O
Uh... you're welcome?
-huggles- This made my day. And that's saying something because today was pretty good. ^_____^ Abbey loves you. Report Review
Claire from the forums here!
Just one thing before I start: It's Ginevra, not Ginerva =]
"A shimmering tear, a cackle from the fire, a scribble of a quill, a drop of ink, all silent and unseen by all." Wow. Such an accurate description of loneliness in a single sentence. Very well written.
That was SO upsetting...but I really, really liked it. I'm a huge angst fan when it is well written, and this story definitely makes the cut.
The mood was incredibly intense, and it lasted throughout the story.
This is awesome, "Her scarlet hair fell like a curtain, shielding one half of her face from the cold, dark world that had become her life." Nice metaphor!
I loved the symbolism you used with the book. Leaving it open...because there is still some much left to be written about her life, and the invisible ink...because somehow, no matter what, she will always be lonely.
The only thing that could have been clearer were the spots when the story changes from Ginny to Harry. The first time I read that section, I was a little confused about the sudden change in setting.
Besides that and the Generva thing, this story was flawless. Fantastic writing and description...you should be very proud!
Adding this to my favorites =]
xxxAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you! And... wow, I totally didn't know I misspelled her name. -blush- Thanks for pointing that out.
Flawless, really? Hehe, thanks so much!
And a favorite? Haha, this really is my day! Report Review
that was wonderful! Author's Response: oh thank you! Report Review
oh my, that was beautiful, a soul stirring story. cant wait to read more of yours.a definite ten!Author's Response: Wow. Geez, thanks. And I thought it sucked... Report Review
Wow, that was great! I absolutlely love your writing style! it was so real and sad... great job! Keep it up! xoxoAuthor's Response: Thanks, I wanted to write something not-so-fluffy, because that is what I usually write. Report Review
That was so awesome. It shocked the crap out of me. I loved it. It's going into my favorites. Loved it. Your stuff is so good. You really need to keep writing angsty stuff. You have the imagination for it. Author's Response: Oh, thank you! This is really my first try at an angst story, glad you liked it! Report Review
this is a really good story and i think it could go even further than just a one shot. i love the way you set the mood for the whole story i the opening few lines. really gave u a sense of what ginny is feeling. great jobAuthor's Response: Thank you. I'm actually working on another one-shot that carries on from this one. It will be a lot different, however. Report Review
that was written really well! I loved it but it may have fit better under the Angst section!Author's Response: Really? You think so? I added angst as a subsection, but I wasn't sure. Report Review
OMG! This is really good, I can't believe you haven't had many reviews. Has it not been read much or something? I don't know! But it's really cool, and highly descriptive, I could imagine them both sitting there, almost like on a stage with two halves, you know like when the TV screen splits in half for phone convers. Well that probably doesn't make much sense but oh well! Great one-shot, I really like it! xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you! It was just posted today, I think, but I submitted it on the 6th. x.x But, I'm glad you found it very descriptive, I wanted to paint a good picture in your mind. Report Review
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