it's very good. i like the storyline idea, i think it's a little bit rushed though. if you know what i mean. it goes from one thing to another to quickly there's not enough description x

Author's Response: i can try to fix that a little.....sry if u dont like it.

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good story! in my fav's

Author's Response: thanx!!!! i'm glad u like it!!!

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good story! in my fav's

Author's Response: thanx!!!!

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Really good, keep writting and I have to know how they react.

Author's Response: thanx!!! i will keep writing. i havn't had very much time to write.....you know.....school. so, sry. but i will have the next couple of chapters for this story in hopefully in a couple days.

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This is so good! you have to update soon! Please!

Author's Response: okay. thanx. do you have any sugestions? if so, email me at: romanticillusion7@netscape.com

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Ooooooh! Please update!!!

Author's Response: I will soon!!!!! Emma

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I hope you update soon - I'm curious about what happened between Harry and Hermione and how Ron will react. But

Author's Response: I hopefully will be getting the next couple of chapters in sometime soon. I've been sick and haven't been able to write for the past few days. Sorry!!! I'm glad you liked it, though. Emma

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damn this is good continue

Author's Response: Thanks!! Hopefully I'll get the next couple chapters in sometime soon. Bye!!! Emma

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oh i like how are ron and ginny going to act i hope you update soon

Author's Response: Thanks!! I should be able to get the next chapters in soon. I'm glad you liked it! Emma

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