Ok, she seems like a nasty girl. I'm hopeing as the story goes on she changes. I hate the word mudblood it kinda gives me chills hahaha. You are really good at makeing characters personalities realistic. really great story so far! I'll be hopeing for more.

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Hey I love all your graphics, would you conciter making me one? E-mail me at amazingbewilderment13@hotmail.com. Thanks.

Author's Response: i know this was like, a month ago, but if you still need graphics go to http://forums.pandoras-closet.net/index.php?act=idx, look up La Deesse Verte and i'd love to help your out.

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Ahhh love it!!! Going on my faves! Charlotte is just a...she just gets on my nerves but oh well. The guy sounds hot. Really. Please update asap por favor? I'll be checkin up on you every now and then remember that lol.

Author's Response: lol. Nice to hear that thier personalities are realistic. Might be a while until the next chapter but i'm working on it. :)

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Oh wow, pretty short but you have no idea how powerful it is. I really love your story so far. And the banner...wow. Alright off to next chappie!

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Wonderful start, I'm sure this is going to be a fantastic story from your writing thus far. Curious, is this Harry's era or James'? You've got my attention.

Author's Response: thanks so much for the complements. and it's supposed to take place in the second generations. So Harry's kids' time.

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Hi! Auguste Vyne/Alek Rykov here from Magic's Finest. I'm Carmen, if you hadn't picked up from the board. Anyway, present tense, yum. I like. :D I forgot where I heard, but some say that present tense makes stories more interesting or something. But a lot of people write in past tense, so ehhh. Nice to see a change, I guess. What a fascinating backstory. Seriously, though. Hmmm. Tom and Stacy. The baby's going to be Charlotte?

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the resopnse! You'll have to wait and see, i have the first real chapter still in the makings. it will probably be a week or so.

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