OhMY Effing God! I love this story! I wish that there was more! It is a cliff hanger and it is amazing! You kept my attention through the whole thing and I loved it! Great job! Report Review
Awww! How cute! Great story ! Added you to favourites! Report Review
That's very well written, but sad. Have to read next chapter. x Kon Weasley x Report Review
I seriously just laughed my butt off. Reading your stories is like riding a roller coaster. One second, it's serious and painful and dark. Then you're all relieved and passionate and intense. And then you're laughing like a crazy person... seriously, that little snippet with Hermione is just hilarious. So perfect. And then it's cute and funny and happy. And then it's serious again and happy and hopeful. It's all like WOAH. Great job. :)Author's Response: Thank you, inky, so glad that you enjoy the ride. :) Report Review
only you could make of sob throughout the first chapter and finnish reading with laughter honestly i loved it. would have loved to see what happened after though you know like expand into a post-hogwarts storyAuthor's Response: lol, aw, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
wow wow wow!!! amazing!! i never want this to end! gosh when they were inturupted, all i thought was "Something's never change"Author's Response: lol, thank you, my wicked quill. :) Report Review
omg. what emotion, wen she screamed for his body, it just it hurt me. incredibleAuthor's Response: aw, thank you! :) Report Review
Loved the story. I've read all of your stories and absolutely(I hope I spelled that right) loved every single one of them. I actually feel like I'm reading a published author when I read your stories because you put a lot of detail in them, and there are very few grammatical errors. You should also know you are the first author I put in my favorite's list, and currently the only, because I'm very picky. Hope you continue writing... escepially Protection(LOVE IT!!)Author's Response: Thank you, vamp_fan, I'm glad you enjoy the stories and the writing. :) Report Review
This was sooo good. This second chapter especially was so funny!! When everyone was walking in on them? haha. That was just too much. Really good job with this. Very well written. I enjoyed it alot. thanks for writing it. My only critique would be that its too short. I wanted it to never end.Author's Response: Thank you, zello! Sorry for the length, this one just wanted to be a short story for some reason. :) Report Review
Wow the banners are really good. Did you make them yourself? The story is good as well :DAuthor's Response: Thank you, Magical Ginny, yes I make my own banners. :) Report Review
Very moving - and very funny also.
Your stories are all a great mix of the two!Author's Response: Thank you! It just seemed to need a little light to balance all the angst and tears at the beginning, lol. :) Report Review
aw that was really cute! I'm more for D/G fics, but a well written H/G fic is a fun read as well=] Your an amazing author!Author's Response: Eww...D/G? :P H/G will win you over in the end. :D Report Review
awww. . . soo sweet. . . . amazing keep up the good work. . . update soon on protection. . .Author's Response: Thank you, ginnygirl. I will try. :) Report Review
Aw...[wipes away tear]...very nice :)Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
Wow...tense! On to chapter two! :)Author's Response: Hope you enjoy :) Report Review
I got so engrossed in this that I was chewing my knuckle. I don't normally chew my knuckle. But I think it means that I was completely absorbed in it. And I was.
I adore how you write Harry and Ginny. I read a LOT of stories about them, and you, by far, are the best writer of their relationship. You kick everyone else out of the stratosphere.
I especially loved the bit with the Weasleys. They're honestly my favourite family in the world. It made me laugh.
Loved, loved, loved it.Author's Response: lol, either absorbed or really hungry! ;) Thank you so much for the compliment about their relationship, I'm glad that they work for you in my stories. :) Report Review
God I love this, so full of emotion. The first chapter was so heart wrenching, you felt for everyone. And then Harry and Ginny finally get their redemption and then, as it most likely would always be, one of the many Weasley find a way to interfere. So unfortunate, but so accurate. I love this line: “Whoops? Your brothers are going to kill me…what will the papers say?” Harry smiled. “Chosen one survives Dark Lord but is killed hours later by rabid Weasleys.”
Perfect ending to a wonderful story.Author's Response: Thank you, collette! I'm really glad that you liked it. I'm going to have to go reread now, I'd forgotten all about that line..hopefully it doesn't lead to me getting sucked into endless tweaking. :D Report Review
I love this story! The ending is hilarious, and romantic of course, but I mean where all the family barges in on them, I mean that would be horrible and embarassing. Once again you did another fabulous job with the emotions in this story. Clearly, as I'm sure you already know, you completely excel in romantic stories. You description is amazing. I absolutely love this story (and all your others). Another fabulous job!
~LeoAuthor's Response: Thank you, Leo, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
I really loved this. The part with the flashback was so well written. I love the emotion that you portrayed near the ending. I read this story when it was still a one shot but I like your idea of breaking up the chapter. This half is absolutely amazing and you picked an ideal place to stop the story. I can't wait to read the next chapter (again :P).
~LeoAuthor's Response: Thank you, Leo, I'm glad that you liked the change. One I started expanding it, it just seemed to make more sense as a two-parter. :) Report Review
Deppresing and then funny at exactly the right time. great sobs I am still a little teary thoughAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you Banda :) Report Review
Ohh!! I LOVED IT! I'm all squirmy inside now. So lovely! Captured the characters' personalities so well :)
10/10Author's Response: lol, thank you! I'm glad you liked the characterizations in this one. :) Report Review
You are one of my favorite authors- I have read "One Look" 3x. Please keep writing. "Protection" is another favorite, although it is a little on the angsty side for me. Probably because of crazy, evil Harry.
I have to admit that I chucked at "Protection"'s banner every time I read a chapter. Its not quite how I picture Harry. :DAuthor's Response: Thank you, Borokat! lol, I love hot random Harry guy, although he has changed to a version of Dan now that they are old enough to not look ridiculous. :) Report Review
i loved this story i give you five stars and two thumbs upAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
SWEET! Nice story! Keep up the good writing!Author's Response: Thank you! I'll definitely keep writing and I hope you continue to read and enjoy. :) Report Review
I liked it! Wonderful short story! I also loved your story One look! Thank you so much for writing these! 10/10
OdenceAuthor's Response: Thank you very much, I'm really happy to see that you've enjoyed my work so far. Thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave a review, it is very much appreciated. :) Report Review
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