{reviewid: 2590359, reviewer: 'Hedwig%20and%20The%20Owl%20Post'}
16th September 2011:
What??!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!???!?!!?!?
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{reviewid: 2575266, reviewer: 'mandyrox96'}
21st August 2011:
is that all there is
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{reviewid: 2569647, reviewer: 'Loveofharrypotter'}
13th August 2011:
I need more I need more I need more I need more
I hope to see more chapters up very very soon
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{reviewid: 2250389, reviewer: 'gymnast23'}
7th November 2009:
2 short
crud
srry, but it should be longer
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{reviewid: 1808091, reviewer: 'Slytherin%20Girl%2001'}
27th January 2008:
W.T.F?O.k I wrote a chapter that was 325 words long and it was rejected and yet this pathetic excuse for a chapter was accpted!? LOSER learn how to write!0/10
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{reviewid: 1402277, reviewer: 'darkangel13'}
1st May 2007:
WHT THE HECK?!11
why so short?
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{reviewid: 1391721, reviewer: 'hidden_angel'}
23rd April 2007:
uh, verry short, needs detail and legth and well... a bit more story altogether
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{reviewid: 1365055, reviewer: 'mrs%20bookworm%20malfoy'}
4th April 2007:
umm. where's the rest...? and why didn't you finish it? u were off 2 a gr8 start. oh well, tell me when you update it. my e-mail is ~denaegirl@charter.net~ e-mail any time!
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{reviewid: 1224620, reviewer: 'soccerstar'}
11th December 2006:
I'm Sorry But It Is Just Way To Short!
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{reviewid: 920400, reviewer: 'HermioneG149'}
28th February 2006:
Sorry, but that was a little too short for me to judge it.
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{reviewid: 907692, reviewer: 'Sarah'}
19th February 2006:
OH COME ON! THIS DOESN'T EVEN CLASSIFY AS DRABBLE! YOU NEED MORE CHAPTERS!
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{reviewid: 893753, reviewer: 'June%20Riddle'}
7th February 2006:
hey when are u going to update
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{reviewid: 858160, reviewer: 'June%20Riddle'}
14th January 2006:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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{reviewid: 810677, reviewer: 'June%20Riddle'}
13th December 2005:
yah plz update it would be a good christmas present to all ur story is really good
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{reviewid: 759738, reviewer: 'June%20Riddle'}
5th November 2005:
that was short you need to writ a longer chapter next time k
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{reviewid: 739104, reviewer: 'Talenyn'}
18th October 2005:
I'm just gonna say this isn't the way to catch someone's attention. That has got to be the most commonly used start for any romance fanfic with Hermione in it, and even for some that aren't romance. Also a paragraph isn't really equal to a chapter. Sorry for being hash, but it's true.
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{reviewid: 713789, reviewer: 'Alex'}
29th September 2005:
Update as soon as possible! ;)
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{reviewid: 482332, reviewer: 'MallCat%20Rose'}
30th April 2005:
unfortunately i DONT luv evil cliffies!
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{reviewid: 154646, reviewer: 'Reveiw%20Story'}
18th May 2004:
Um...cliff-hanger? It's not really surprising...make you chapters longer...Ah yeah.
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{reviewid: 89507, reviewer: 'awvyubawjdlfhg'}
28th December 2003:
what do you mean evil cliff hangers?!?!? there was nothing at all in that,tiny paragraph! You should have wrote more, i mean there is nothing that draws me to continue. I;m sorry but your story soo far is WEAK! write some more and then we'll talk.
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{reviewid: 65402, reviewer: 'lil%5C%27%20kitty-lover'}
28th August 2003:
please continue and please don\'t bail on this story. you\'ve just started and you could make a hole lot of good ideas on this story. just relax and ideas will come to your head. i won\'t write but u have to finish what you\'ve started.
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{reviewid: 53676, reviewer: 'Pistol'}
21st July 2003:
YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON PLEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ GOOD START
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{reviewid: 52805, reviewer: 'ley'}
19th July 2003:
Heyy~ Post more soon!!! Please! I hate cliff hangers! ~ley~
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{reviewid: 50048, reviewer: 'nadia'}
9th July 2003:
hey this iz so far good!!!write more!!!draco is the head boy right???hehehe!!!
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{reviewid: 48312, reviewer: 'ginnymalfoy'}
2nd July 2003:
its kinda short but cool you need to make chapters longer (let me guesss ahhh draco malfoy is head boy right?)
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