Good, really good.
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That was good, I like it. It's really very convincing for a Dramione story, which I normally don't like. But I liked your ending. But I think you should probably separate each paragraph, which would make it easier to read, and it might be a good idea to do spell check on this. Just trying to help. It's a well-written story, and I enjoyed reading it. Report Review
Aww *sniff sniff* that is a sad story. Report Review
Coward...Author's Response: excuse me? Report Review
OMG!!! ok, i just used this username. So, e-mail me the response. you know me from shcool, so ya.
this talking to you is afriend that you "think is the coolest 9 year old.
but anyway, i loved the story!!!!!!!!!! it made me cry.Author's Response: im not stupid, chloe Report Review
omg!!!i read it in school cus my friend showed this story to me...i almost cried...then i went back home to read it again cus i really loved it...i really cried...that was so sad...Author's Response: aww thx!!! Report Review
Very good. Impressive. Report Review
wow! thats all i can say Report Review
oh my gosh, this made me cry so much...Author's Response: yep, thats what I was going for! Report Review
oh my gosh, this made me cry so much... Report Review
awwwwww how sad i loved it though Report Review
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