Reading Reviews for Running Away
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by icefox Chapter 6

25th February 2006:
love the story

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Review #2, by icefox Prologue-Chapter One

20th February 2006:
i like how the story is going, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

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Review #3, by SlytherinsGirl232 Chapter 2-3

12th February 2006:
I think this story is really good so far!

I can tell that it has potential but there are a few suggestions that I have! For starters, the first chapter (prologue), I think it would be best if you could spread out the text a bit more. Readers (well me) find it distracting having the paragraphs so close together! Another thing, for dialogue (such as when people are talking) I think it would be better if you were to use quotation marks as to what you are using now because it is much easier for readers to distinguish between what is dialogue and what is not.

I think this story could be really good if you work on it and perhaps make the chapters a little longer! You left off at a really good spot creating suspense which makes readers want to know what happens next. This will keep readers coming back to read more and find out what happened.

Overall I think you did a good job on these first few chapters and I enourage you to keep up the good writing and keeping it interesting and having readers interested! I'll be back to check up on this story in a little while and hopefully you've updated!:P.

Happy Writing!

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Review #4, by SAH13 Chapter 2-3

10th February 2006:
Love it so far. Keep writing please. Can't what to see what happens next. :)

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Review #5, by Mermaid Prologue-Chapter One

3rd February 2006:
Hummm, you have me intregued... Although I'm not a fan of Remus/ anyone but tonks ships, but I'll give this one a try

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