Wow, I loved how funny Harry was in this, I actually laughed out loud at some of his lines ha. And i love ho Hermione is always looking for protection with Ron...Very Hermione like Report Review
It was alright. I felt you made Hermione a little...too oc. She was a bit off character, more of a girly-girl that freaks out at the littlest things, which is not how we know Rowling to portray her.
The idea was good, the anagrams idea was brilliant.
But I felt it was missing something. I'm not sure what it was exactly, but I felt your story was missing something important.
Also, it dragged on JUST a bit. Constructive criticism, please don't take it any other way!
Good job on your first one-shot of them, though.Author's Response: nope, I know exactly what you mean! This one of of my very first one shots, written when I was like 16 or something. so I agree entirely, hermione was a bit ooc and it did drag a bit. I appreciate your constructive criticism though! :) Report Review
I was laughing so much at the beginning. It was a very cute and funny story. Report Review
this story was so cute! =D Report Review
really cute one-shot i liked it alot :) Report Review
I for one loved it . Report Review
I really liked this story. Great job! Report Review
that was really cute!!! lol i liked it! Report Review
That was really cute! Report Review
This was great. Offially and incredibly superb! Must I say again how much I adored it? Well, anyway, I really liked it. : ) 10/10 Report Review
good liked it Report Review
hehe, that was great.
it was a good hermy/ron story. the awkwardness, the whole both in denial thing.
well, i loved it!
Aww that was adorable!!! Report Review
i lOVED iT!!! It was so sweet! haha ILY, HG was so clever and Ron was so adorable! HG/RW FOREVER!!! Report Review
um, well, i check my email alot, so i will post my email in my website box and erace it when you email me. Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! you are awsome!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
OOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really like it! it was really good. i also don't think that it had a cliffhanger! you are a really good writher! "Did he french you?" i laughed soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hard! well done! rating:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::20million outa 10!
i was also wondering if you could do a banner for me. just like the story, the banner was awsome! i would love a banner of your skill! would you be interested?Author's Response: I would be happy to make a banner for you. How can I get in contact with you though, so I can work out the details and such? If you get this, go to my homepage and leave a message on the cbox, and make sure you enter your email and your name, and I'll email you asap!
Darkwing73181 Report Review
Author Quote: 'My first Ron/Hermione one shot! Yaay!'
Woah really? That was brilliant. Keep writing, and stay amazing. =] Report Review
I've never read something that caught the heart of the Rowlings world before Report Review
I really liked it. I liked the title, and when I first saw your banner (title) on pearluna's fav. stories, I was trying to find out what illy hig was, but then I realized that HG was Hermione Granger and then I knew: I Love You was ILY. So I mean that I really liked your title, and it made me want to read your story, which I also enjoyed immensly.
-CL Report Review
that's good...reeeeeaaaaal goooooood!!!!! Report Review
Very long indeed. Yet very good! Ten out of ten! Report Review
Oh my gosh, i am speechless. OH! This story was so well done. I enjoyed reading it immensely!!! I thought it was so adorable, and the grammer and spelling was so well done!!! I don't even have anything to say, this was just brillant! so beautiful. I can't think, lol, well, great writing, Continue especially!!! This one-shot was gorgeous and definitely, without a doubt, worth my time! It is definitely worth a 9, i am so jealous, I loved everything!!! :) Job well done! *[claps hands quietly waiting for an encore]* Report Review
very good story. i especially liked all the humor at the Dursely's Report Review
wow i was looking 4 this story wanted 2 read it again its still as good as i remember
Good! Really good! I really enjoyed it! Report Review
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