Hey, great story plot, you need to space it out though! i had the same problem, press enter after anyone speaks or after 6 sentences. that will make it easier to read. but overall you should keep going! i feel special for being the first to review!!! heheAuthor's Response: Thanx so much for reviewing ur my first one so I thank u and thanx for the advice Report Review
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