I would think that Voldemort would be more cruel than you have him in this chapter. 'Which is why having Hogwarts students as Death Eater’s would help me a great deal. ' No ' needed in Eaters. Good chapter, I like how you changed perspectives.Author's Response: When I picture Voldemort, I don't picture him cruel to a Death Eater who is about to join him. I'd imagine him more cold and powerful. But thanks for the review! Report Review
I like how you wrote that James came in and hexed Spencer. Sounds like something that James would do. :) Good chapter!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate the review. Report Review
Interesting first chapter! Watch out on Mary Sues for looks, though. (Just a little warning) I like how you have Lily in the end.Author's Response: Yes, I often end up making my characters look too beautiful... I'll try to work on that in the future! Report Review
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