6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by HeyMrsPotter Harry Potter and changing the course of the Future

14th July 2013:
Hello! I'm here to review for the house cup!

I think the formatting of this story made it a little difficult to read, maybe some paragraphs and spacing would help? Also if the letters were in italics, it was a little hard to distinguish where they began and ended. I think some of the behaviour was a little OOC, I don't think Harry and Ron would have been so blase about Hermione's death. That being said, the content of your story was interesting. I like the sense of mystery you created by Hermione's body never being found and Harry thinking that he saw her at the station. An interesting start.

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Review #2, by Emma Harry Potter and changing the course of the Future

25th October 2007:
Can u pleaze write more! It's really good so far!

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Review #3, by crystal allan Harry Potter and changing the course of the Future

9th August 2005:
I like this story, it has a good line to it.

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Review #4, by iluv danRaDcLiFfE Harry Potter and changing the course of the Future

14th December 2004:
great! hope they find hermione! not rubbish if you ask me!

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Review #5, by emma grant Harry Potter and changing the course of the Future

15th February 2003:
nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that can not be true! please do another chapter please i was nearly crying plase do a other chapter or i will never know

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Review #6, by Staysee Harry Potter and changing the course of the Future

13th December 2002:
OOOoooooo! I like it! Are you going to write more? I want to see what happens!!!

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