this was just soo fresh so funny, the summary really said it all, and the conversation was really fun, trying to guess what was going on. great job 10/10 Report Review
weird! i wonder who their married to. Report Review
Aw that's so cute! I liked it. It was really funny, too. I didn't find it confusing at all. I really liked Harry's line at the end: "And if they are boys, Harry Jr. and Harry Jr. number two." On a different note, it would be more enjoyable to read if you fixed your grammatical errors. But good job! Report Review
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wow, how can some people be so stupid as to not get the boyfriend/husband partAuthor's Response: Lol. No comment. Report Review
This is really cute. I love Ginny at the end saying, "I heard that." When it comes to names Harry is doing a Michael Jackson - his two sons are both names after him. Weird.
Well written, good characters.
Keep writing.Author's Response: Lol. I didn't know that. Michael Jackson... creapy. Report Review
lol! i liked this! was random, and randomness rocks!! i was a little confused about that marry talk and love talk... wasnt sure what they were on about til it became clear that they were joking around, speaking of each other as if they were two people, husband and harry and ginny and wife lol! but the kids were sweet, loved the fluffiness and the names and such! nice little one-shot! well done!
Rose :)Author's Response: Yeah, lots of people think it's confusing. Sorry about that. =] But, I have a hard time changing it, because when you know that they are the same person, then no parts are confusing. You know? Anyways, thanks for the review! Report Review
So funny! I like the ending. How would you liked to be named Harry Jr. #2? That would kind of suck. And Lilly should be Lily. Love the story, though. I give it a 9/10. Minus one point for the name Jamie, I don't like it that much. Keep up the good writing!Author's Response: Yeah, I know. But, I know someone names Lilly so it's hard for me to spell it with one 'l' because she is always really into making sure people spell her name rght. But, I'm going to go back and change it. Sorry about the name =[.
~Addie Report Review
aw this is so very cute love this.Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
Ah LOVED it. hehe...the playful banter between Harry and Ginny was amusing and cute. And Jamie? Never thought of that name, but I love how it has a bit of James in it..thats really cool.
Great one-shot though..it was an enjoyable read and very very cute.
I loved this line: “And if they are boys Harry Jr. and Harry Jr. number two.”
-quidditch77Author's Response: Thanks, most people love that line.
And, honestly, I just picked Jamie because I really like the name! Lol, I never thought about the connection to James, but ever since someone pointed it out, I've been using the name even more! Report Review
Hahah this is so funny!
I love Harry's and Ginny's sense of humour, and the “Harry, I don’t think my husband would want you doing that!” line made me really giggle.
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100,000,000/10Author's Response: Haha! Thanks!! I love the banners! Report Review
Still looking for a banner, cos I can make one...Author's Response: Yeah, I really need one! Report Review
I found this story a bit confusing.they're not married, but are they? Hmm..could you clarify? Still thoguht it was cute.
DragonetteAuthor's Response: It was a joke between them. Like they are married but Harry is her "boyfriend" that way when they fight and stuff she can talk to her 'boyfriend". Report Review
Is Ginny and Harry are married together?? I was getting lost in this?? @_@10-10Author's Response: Ahh! Lots of people got lost!! I'm so very sorry, I was trying to write differently then i always do, and I don't think I did too well. Well, thanks for reading and reviewing, though it wasn't good enough for you to understand. Report Review
lol i love it its realy funny
xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm really glad you did!! Thanks so much!! Report Review
Hey, great story, eventhough its slightly confusing.
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dreamseekerAuthor's Response: Sorry that it was confusing for you. I have got that a lot... I may need to think about how to express my thoughts in a better way so everyone can understand, I'm not to good at that, this story has done as well as i had hoped. Anyway, thanks for the review and i wll be going to your site. Report Review
that was pretty much AMAZING.Author's Response: Thanks so much. I had a very good time writing it. I like your name :). Thanks again! Report Review
IU'm really not into fluff but this one was pretty good. A litle confusing, but I like it. Good job.Author's Response: Oh, well thanks for reading. Sorry, but i'm not very good at writing anything but fluff. For me it makes me happy, and sometimes they are so fully is silly and i can't help but laugh. Thanks again for the review. I'm sorry it was confusing- sometimes i can't explain what i mean very well. Thanks again! Report Review
^_^ this was a cute story!!
GinnyWeasleyPotterAuthor's Response: Thanks so very much. I love all your stories also! Report Review
I just realized i never commented on thsi one, but i read it again and i still love it just as much!! Don't you say that you aren't a good writer, because you are. The only thing that needs work is a little editing!
~FayeAuthor's Response: I know, today i did some editing, i just don't like that part... ;) Report Review
This was quite an amusing story. It kept me smiling, and I definitely laughed out loud a few times--always a great sign. I thought that Ginny's character was well done. You could still see the base character we meet in the books, but she has changed and matured some--something that [usually] happens after someone has a child. I loved the game the two played, and the last line was wonderful. Also, it was nice that they named their daughter Jamie--a tribute to Harry's father, no?
I have some constructive criticism as well: It would help if you either checked over your stories again before posting or had someone else do it for you. (I would be happy to do it if you need someone.)There were some little mistakes that could have been caught. For example, "Ok" should either be Okay or O.K. (So many people make this mistake.) And: "They he[a]rd footsteps from upstairs and I[a] small girl appeared at the staircase,[;] she was looking threw[through] two wooden posts, [and] she had a tear stained face,[.] “mum-my,” she cried as she run[ran] down,[.] she jumped up on her mother lap and hugged her." Fixing these little things would increase the overall quality of the work. (Oh, by the way, I loved the image in those sentences--see if you can add more like them.)
Overall, I really enjoyed reading this story. I’m glad I made some time to read one of your stories. It was definitely worthwhile. Happy writing!
Author's Response: Yeah, i don't like to edit... but i did it today! Report Review
that was awesome! i love how easy-going and fun it was to read!
absolutely fantastic, luvved it!Author's Response: Thank-you so much! Report Review
Your story made me smiled. I like that you let the reader think that they were not together at first. Very enjoyable read. Author's Response: Thanks, thats kinda what i was hoping for. Sometimes thats fun to read! Report Review
Nice story! :-P Well done!:-)Author's Response: Thaks, i glad you liked it! Report Review
It's ok-----Author's Response: Ok, thanks for reading! Report Review
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