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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Dragon Rider Girl The Dark side of Mr Crouch

10th June 2005:
you obviously have a gift for writing!

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Review #2, by TrentFordishot The Dark side of Mr Crouch

20th February 2004:
Nice fic...update quick kk?

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Review #3, by arukas The Dark side of Mr Crouch

12th November 2003:
Good, at least the idea seems original. But you really need to watch you changing of tense. Most of the time you are doign a recount of events, but every now and then you go into present tense while describing things. Also right at the end you spelt two words wrong, route and something else i cant remember. I think ill give this fic a good score though, hwo does a 9 sound?

Author's Response: cool thanks for reading :)

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