{reviewid: 2732933, reviewer: 'RedWeasley1212'}
19th August 2012:
Thats a very good story. You captured the marauders perfectly. I loved it, hilarious! :P 10!
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{reviewid: 2150527, reviewer: 'Nips'}
27th June 2009:
Lol u made me laugh!
*ur FRENCH lesson is over* bahahahahahhaha.
BEST.
xx
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{reviewid: 1878777, reviewer: 'CheerLachlan'}
27th March 2008:
That was cute. I really liked it! I will definatley be reading more of your stories!
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{reviewid: 1705287, reviewer: 'Cyan%20Green%20Zephyr'}
9th November 2007:
Wow, the ending was fantastic. I really think you should just tack the "James potter was...best one, really." bit straight onto the story. It's a wonderfully fluffy ending, and makes me smile unwittingly. Marvelous fluff, and keep writting, thanks for it all~ Ran
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{reviewid: 1703968, reviewer: 'blimey'}
8th November 2007:
very funny.
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{reviewid: 1214160, reviewer: 'Laugharama_llama'}
1st December 2006:
i dont like the alternate ending. the other one is way better.
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{reviewid: 1070952, reviewer: 'summerlove%20x3%20%28notloggedin%29'}
21st July 2006:
I have say, I like the alternative ending. And I wish I was Lily with ANY of the marauders minus peter.
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{reviewid: 1042380, reviewer: 'pearluna'}
29th June 2006:
Heh. That almost made me giggle... but i laughed instead ;) Good story!
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{reviewid: 1041020, reviewer: 'Deli'}
28th June 2006:
Like the alternative ending lol.
Really lovely story!
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{reviewid: 1035592, reviewer: 'swimming'}
24th June 2006:
hahah an alternate ending after that long diatribe and wonderful planning?? meh, I prefer the snog xP
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{reviewid: 1034478, reviewer: 'RupertsPheonix'}
23rd June 2006:
Aww, cute! The giggle thing is so true, though. My friends and I are always giggling at something... Anyways, really cute! =)
--RP
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{reviewid: 933093, reviewer: 'Larka'}
11th March 2006:
Wow, you do this really well. no grammer mistakes, no spelling mistakes, intersting plot- i love your writing, keep at it.
Author's Response: Trust me, there are spelling n grammar mistakes...but thanks for makin me feel good XDXD You love my writing? SANKS SOOO MUCHLY! *run off to write masterpiece for Larka* XDXD
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{reviewid: 912238, reviewer: 'chewing_gum12'}
22nd February 2006:
that was so cool! but it didn't hurt Lily to be slapped against the wall? When my BF did that I got a bruse and dam* it hurt like heck! but great story!
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{reviewid: 911642, reviewer: 'The_Laughing_Maraudress'}
21st February 2006:
I liked it! It was cute!
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{reviewid: 902281, reviewer: 'MagicalMiss'}
14th February 2006:
Loved it like a crunchy nut loves...well crunchy nut. (sorry just saw the ad) the story was sweet and we all love public humiliation when it happens to others...
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{reviewid: 896410, reviewer: 'wishiwereLily'}
10th February 2006:
I love your story, and it doesn't suck, no matter what you say. Of course, I'm a sucker for James and Lily making out in public places, so... Yeah, I have two favorite parts. One, where Remus talks about when girls giggle, and two, when Sirius says, "my daily James-shoving-his-tongue-down-Evans'-throat viewing is over." Basically, this is the first review I've written and I liked your story so much that I decided to search for it and review it first. Once again, I LOVED IT! Call me crazy.
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{reviewid: 895454, reviewer: 'Rogue_and_Raven'}
9th February 2006:
I like the alternative ending myself but you know and I want a Sirius story...as always.... :o)
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{reviewid: 888177, reviewer: 'oinker'}
3rd February 2006:
Great, as always. That is some pretty hysterical stuff you've got there! Excellent writing! And you are correct, girls have giggles for every occassion. :)
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{reviewid: 887381, reviewer: 'Elizabeth%20Weasly'}
3rd February 2006:
really funny!!!! seriously, not bad!!!!! but i know, youre a writer, everything u write seems bad. trust me, m step dad, my best friend and my sister are all writers and they all say thier best stuff is sucky. this is reeeeeeeely (heh. thank god i'm not a writer) good. um, funny, good... OH YEAH!! i like the ending you chose better than the alternate ending, though that was also good. i liked the pretense of this story, with james being fed up with alice giggling. i always saw her as a giggler too. um, thassit. awesome job!
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{reviewid: 887034, reviewer: 'lime%20flavoured%20bertie%20bott'}
3rd February 2006:
that was great! i almost pulled a read-it-and-leave-it...but then i decided it was far too good not to review! i like how you toned down james' attitude and made him a little more unsure of girls, it really worked in this story. the point of view changes were also well timed and helped with the flow of the story, and your humour just adds to the overall greatness! wonderful! i give it a 10!
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{reviewid: 886845, reviewer: 'LunaB1134'}
2nd February 2006:
Aw...I love both the endings. So cute. And Fluffy!!!! yay! Its wonderful how he just shoves her against a wall and kisses her and doesn't do anything original because it is James-Like. Great job! My fav line is about the houses. I swear I was going to die laughing. :) ~Luna
P.S. Its not sucky. It does not suck, therefore, it is not sucky.
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{reviewid: 883202, reviewer: 'mmm_bacon'}
31st January 2006:
lol this is original and funny, i really enjoyed reading this!
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{reviewid: 880500, reviewer: 'SiriusGal'}
29th January 2006:
I really like the alternate ending! It's really cute!
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{reviewid: 879505, reviewer: 'kissed_by_karma'}
29th January 2006:
aww...awww...*giggles*...this is a very cute and funny *giggles* story...i loved it...*giggles*...especially u'r alternate ending *giggles*...very sweet....:P...
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{reviewid: 879337, reviewer: 'Snake'}
29th January 2006:
me like!
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