this was a cute little one shot. It would do well with a companion piece.

I do have one little question that's bugging me.

It seems as though just because they were caught and Draco says he doesnt want to risk her life, Hermione was like "ok sure no problem"... If shes as stubborn as he says she is, then wouldn't she fight for what she wants?

otherwise good story :D

*slytherangoddess*
slytherin

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AHHH!! How kind of Draco but it makes me sad! I really liked it! :7)

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dat is wiked i love it lol plz finish it off

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ugh so unrealistic

Author's Response: It was suppost to be. That is why I did it. I wanted something a little different than what I normally do. So I did that.

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naAaYZZZZ!!!

tHATZ alL

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naAaYZZZZ!!!

tHATZ alL

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I love your story. It was very sweet! Keep up the good work =D

-Sandra

Author's Response: I wanted this to be very sweet and short! Thank you soo much. I love you all!!

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The first few sentences were a bit choppy, but the rest was fine. I liked the plot, but it was a bit sudden with the whole kissing thing and such. A tiny bit cheesy at the end and there were some spelling and grammar mistakes. But I like your word usage and how Draco broke up with her to protect her; that was very sweet. I think I can think up a good title for the sequel, but I need a summary for my brain to come up with one, so...... I dunno, it depends. Good luck!
~~**Lane**~~

Author's Response: THANK YOU!! I know that it was sudden with the whole kissing, but I didn't know how to write a short one-shot where everyone loves eachother because they dont. but thank you!

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I really LUFF your story!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I will definatly keep writing things as I have gotten so many reviews!! ~DM

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Aw, that was really good though, I'd love to read the sequel so I'll be keeping a look out xXx

Author's Response: thank you!! I will post the sequel as soon as I get a grasp on my other two stories!

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Hannah, this is SO fabulous, though, I mush admit the *cough* "f***ing" caught me by surprise. I'm glad you trusted me enough to finally let me read those stories you're always writting in the corner. Keep it up cause you totally ROCK...but you already knew that. ^_^

Author's Response: thank you tyler! You ROCK too!! see you in Geometry!!

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That iz a great story.....keep it up!!!! but one thing.....hermionie / draco!
its not fair.....lol!! ^.^ i want him! but apart from that your great!! a pro....

Author's Response: so do i but we cant have everything can we???

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You didn't say anything about them Fing. No fair! I want a description! ............ A graphic one.

Author's Response: I did say that I am working on a sequel didn't I?

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how about you know i am a sexy penguin? or the penguins steal my sanity or what about something sweet like for the love of you.

Author's Response: do you like penguins that much?? Wow. My friend is obsessed with Hippos. Does that count? But yeah, I was thinking of somthing sweet, that's a good name. ~thanx

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i love this story!! It's so well written. I'm actually a Hermione/Ron shipper but this is fantastic!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I love Green Day too!! I do think that Ron likes Hermione, I just believe that they wouldnt work out well. they just fight way too much. But I wouldnt mind it if they got together in the books, after all what JKR says, goes!

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Attack of the Hippogrifs! No! When first years attack! Panseys murder! you pick. I <3 you Sheila! ^.^

Author's Response: Ha Ha stephanie. Thanks for your wonderful review! You write your story, When first years attack and I'd read it!!!! I <3 you Stephanie!! ^.^'

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Very, very good story! lol It was surely different than others and the beggining was very realistic, I could totally picture Hermione in the library bickering with Draco. Nice chapter. Title of the sequel: Perfect Destruction (lol, I have NO idea how that came to me!) Nice chapter. ~Anastasia

Author's Response: thank you soo much. I have written some of the sequel and I dont yet have a title so I might use that if you dont mind. It's very fitting for my story, which takes place post-HBP, and this takes place durring OotP, for some one who didnt figure that out, so thank you a lot!!

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