{reviewid: 2735483, reviewer: 'jjGiGGleS316'}
28th August 2012:
Lmfao this story is awesome
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{reviewid: 1192027, reviewer: 'the_afterglow'}
| Review #2, by the_afterglow | The bet |
11th November 2006:
awsome! i love this fic! dont worry bout the gramma - im spanish and i hav to get my cuz to chek through it!
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{reviewid: 1098418, reviewer: 'JimJams'}
10th August 2006:
this story was wicked. it was funny and i can#'t believe sirius kissed snape.ew!
xxx
JimJams or Jodie
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{reviewid: 970945, reviewer: 'RiddleMeNot'}
27th April 2006:
your grammar angers me...
"Ofcause, a ball. James this is your change, you'll ask Lily to the ball" Emily couldn't help laughing.- of course (ofcause is not a word), chance (change has a completely different meaning)
"well, maybe because I am a girl and talks to Lily every single day" It was her turn to smirk.-who (in place of and) OR talk (in place of talks)
"A MONTH!" Her mouth dropped."Come on Black, not even you have had a girlfriend in a month."-for a month (duration)
then you keep switching back and forth from third to second person
congrads on writing a whole fic in a foreign language
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{reviewid: 969322, reviewer: 'prongsie_potter_rulez'}
25th April 2006:
LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL ha ha ha that woz BRILLAINT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10/10
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{reviewid: 969196, reviewer: 'ChizzaLazty'}
25th April 2006:
It's funnya and cute, and I think that's the most important tings. I noticed that some places you have written 'me', some places 'you' and other places 'Emily'. Other than that and a small amount of writing mistakes this is a great story=)
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{reviewid: 968711, reviewer: 'choco_baby101'}
| Review #7, by choco_baby101 | The bet |
24th April 2006:
hey hey hey, great fic, i would love a sequel where emily and sirius or remus get togther. btw, your grammers fine.
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{reviewid: 955058, reviewer: 'Jennifer%20Rosa'}
| Review #8, by Jennifer Rosa | The bet |
9th April 2006:
Short, simple and cute. I wish we found out, what changed Lilys mind.
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{reviewid: 935415, reviewer: 'Judith'}
13th March 2006:
*dies laughing* loved it!
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{reviewid: 911005, reviewer: 'The_Laughing_Maraudress'}
| Review #10, by The_Laughing_Maraudress | The bet |
21st February 2006:
lol I liked it but I wish you made Emily allow Sirius not to kiss Snape.
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{reviewid: 910619, reviewer: 'chewing_gum12'}
| Review #11, by chewing_gum12 | The bet |
21st February 2006:
That was funny!
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{reviewid: 908461, reviewer: 'cASSIE'}
19th February 2006:
LOL LOL
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{reviewid: 900227, reviewer: 'hpgirl_91'}
12th February 2006:
Wait what happened! I am so confused. This was a great story but I thought under to cicumstances was Lily going to the ball with Potter. WHAT??? Great job on your story even if it was a little confusing
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{reviewid: 888103, reviewer: 'I%20love%20James%20Potter'}
3rd February 2006:
YOu should write a sequal. This is funny. I like the part with sirius kissing Snape. I couldnt stop laughing.
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{reviewid: 886820, reviewer: 'until_the_day_i_die'}
| Review #15, by until_the_day_i_die | The bet |
2nd February 2006:
omg wow i reallyyy like this story its really funny. good job!
Author's Response: I glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 883241, reviewer: 'mmm_bacon'}
31st January 2006:
lmao this is hilarious, can't wait to read more of your writing!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm writing another fiction, should be up very soon.
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{reviewid: 882967, reviewer: 'pearluna'}
31st January 2006:
i liked it..... so funny.. almost burst a lung laughing....
Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't burst that lung, it would make a mess. And cleaning's not funny. But thank you!
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{reviewid: 879066, reviewer: 'LilyMaria'}
28th January 2006:
Kind of confusing but all in all i like it! love it. good work!
Author's Response: When I look at it now, I can see what you mean about it being a bit confusing, but thanks for liking it!
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{reviewid: 879046, reviewer: 'Mags'}
28th January 2006:
hahahaha...this is funny...good job!!!
Author's Response: :)
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{reviewid: 878857, reviewer: 'Snake'}
28th January 2006:
lol! I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
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{reviewid: 878629, reviewer: 'harrypottersangel'}
28th January 2006:
For someone who is Danish, your grammer is very good! Good job. I liked the story!
Author's Response: Merci. I liked writing the story.
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{reviewid: 878564, reviewer: 'kissed_by_karma'}
| Review #22, by kissed_by_karma | The bet |
28th January 2006:
i love u'r story i think its very cute and original...and dont worry about u'r grammar, for someone who isn't fluent in english its great! I would love it if u continuedthis ;)
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{reviewid: 878563, reviewer: 'kissed_by_karma'}
| Review #23, by kissed_by_karma | The bet |
28th January 2006:
i love u'r story i think its very cute and original...and dont worry about u'r grammar, for someone who isn't fluent in english its great! I would love fo ru to continue this ;)
Author's Response: Thank you.
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{reviewid: 878467, reviewer: 'elle21'}
28th January 2006:
lol this is so funny!!!! you have to do another story!!
Author's Response: thank you. I'm writing a new story at the moment, should be up soon.
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{reviewid: 878459, reviewer: 'Captain%20Chemo'}
28th January 2006:
Very funny...*wipes tears of laughter*...sirius...bet..snape...kiss...very good!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it!
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