{reviewid: 2624824, reviewer: 'StarryLaura'}
4th December 2011:
:') You don't even know how beautiful this story is. I seriously started tearing up at the end of this. I can't imagine Hermione as a Death Eater, but it's represents her love so much that I can't even...URGH. You have me at a loss for words.
I love the way you use parallelism in your writing for memories. When Hermione spoke of "the Draco she loved", those different peaks of their relationship really relayed that she didn't know who the man standing in front of her was anymore. And when Draco was being tortured and he attempted to recall his favorite aspects of Hermione, I felt so sad that he couldn't see the image of her in his mind anymore, except for when the Death Eaters forced one of her in fear and death into his head...I'm pathetic.
I loved how Hermione couldn't make it to the end of the hallway when she ran from him, and that both were indifferent to the blood running from Draco's hand. The measures they take to be together alive...it's so beautiful. And amazing. And so are you. :)
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{reviewid: 2223049, reviewer: 'FallenAngel4'}
23rd September 2009:
wow. this only proves more the power of love :) sweet and touching. just wonderful
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{reviewid: 2137347, reviewer: 'HogwartsGirl618'}
8th June 2009:
Beautiful. To save you. And Draco- "What must I do"? I loved it. The interesting thing in HP is that the Death Eaters will kill anyone. And the Order would never kill Draco. The Dark Side is- in a way- safer. And your story really explored that idea- and the pain involved with Draco choice- which he made for Hermione =) Fantastic Writing. My only question is -what about Harry? Doesn't Hermione believe that there are things worth dying for? Or maybe she does- but she can't see things worth DRACO dying for. Love is tricky. =)
Author's Response: This is one of my favorite old pieces. Boiled down it has one of my favorite points. Yay for morals ^_^ Thank you for so diligently reviewing ^_^
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{reviewid: 2112057, reviewer: 'Rosalie%20Beckett'}
5th May 2009:
Wow, this was great. The last line made me tear up. Their absolute devotion to each other was amazing and you're a very gifted writer.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Rosalie ^_^
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{reviewid: 1913633, reviewer: 'jenrabbit'}
3rd May 2008:
Hmm, would Voldie take Hermione? I mean she's smart enough and all, but she's also muggle born.
Excelently written though, didn't recognize the songs, I'll have to look em up. Beautifully detailed, and totaly a 10/10!! ^.^
kisses
~*Jenni*~
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!! I really appreciate your support!!!
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{reviewid: 1848942, reviewer: 'winter_wonderland'}
1st March 2008:
*blink* Hermione as a Death Eater? Is that even possible being non-pureblood? What happened to her Gryffindor chivalry Or maybe that's what did it... But why?! WHY? I don't think I will ever understand.
Author's Response: You are exactly right - it was her undying sense of loyalty and her desire for piece and stability that drove her there. Ironic when you think about it ^_-
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{reviewid: 1845114, reviewer: 'pisceandreams'}
26th February 2008:
And yet I love this one too. You're just amazing!!
Author's Response: Aw that is too sweet! Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1773279, reviewer: 'hermioneginnyluna'}
1st January 2008:
WERE YOU DRUNK AND/OR LOADED WHEN YOU WROTE THE ENDING! I LIKE THE STORY EXCEPT FOR HOW IT ENDED! I KNOW IT WAS ROMANTIC AND ALL BUT SIRIUSLY: HERMIONE, GRYFFINDOR'S GOLDEN GIRL, A DEATH EATER?! SHE IS HARRY'S RIGHT-HAND GIRL! ANYWAY, GOOD JOB! KEEP WRITING!-HERMIONEGINNYLUNA
Author's Response: No - I was not. Its best not to say those sorts of things though in a review. I am glad you enjoyed and reviewed, however.
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{reviewid: 1723749, reviewer: 'hanoverpretz01'}
23rd November 2007:
amazing
keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you for all these reviews, hun!
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{reviewid: 1709814, reviewer: 'EileenPrince'}
13th November 2007:
Never been much of a Dramione fan, but that was really sweet. Loved the last sentence. Hermy is so... sweet. :D
I often like the dark/tragic/angsty fics, but I really enjoyed it. Not so much 'fluff', but so sweet :D i've said 'sweet' like, five times. Sound like a surfer. Haahahahahahaha ahahaha. Inwards joke, lol.
Ariane
z (haha, geddit? Instead of 'x')
Author's Response: Ha ha, you amuse me. Thank you ^_-
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{reviewid: 1687894, reviewer: 'hogwarts_girl'}
28th October 2007:
You know what I'm going to say. (:
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^
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{reviewid: 1675398, reviewer: 'nina92'}
19th October 2007:
hey that was a really good story.
usualy i prefer reading long ones but this was really good.
congrats ey.
Author's Response: Thanks Nina ^_-
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{reviewid: 1674015, reviewer: 'Monkeymoiz'}
18th October 2007:
wow that was good althought the lyrics things put me off at times, I still really liked nice work
Author's Response: Thank you very much ^_^
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{reviewid: 1649648, reviewer: 'Dracos%20Summer%20Sweetheart'}
30th September 2007:
Aww In A Way Thats A Lovely Storiie !
Dracos Summer Sweetheart
x
Author's Response: Thank you my dear ^_^
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{reviewid: 1594560, reviewer: 'TrueLoveStoriesNeverEnd'}
24th August 2007:
now thats good.
struggling with the idea of Hermione becoming a death eater.
i think i can do it if i concentrate =P
also good song to pick =] i always thought Going Under was one of the best Evanescence songs.
oh and nice banner. but i expect you get that a lot =]
~Rhona~
Author's Response: Thank you very much Rhona ^_^
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{reviewid: 1576823, reviewer: 'harryloveshermione299'}
15th August 2007:
aw that was good. i like it. i hope hermione isnt killed though...
Author's Response: Thanks ^_-
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{reviewid: 1567776, reviewer: 'AussieAnatomy627'}
11th August 2007:
That was so.good!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1565540, reviewer: 'xXSexy_Little_SlytherinXx'}
10th August 2007:
This is so beautiful! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 1561495, reviewer: 'sunshinedreamr'}
8th August 2007:
Wow. That was very romantic in a dark sort of way. I really loved it.
Author's Response: Thankies ^_^
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{reviewid: 1547628, reviewer: 'dramione12'}
1st August 2007:
Awww...That was sooo sweet...yet sad... I loved it...Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much ^_^
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{reviewid: 1541886, reviewer: 'RachelBee42'}
30th July 2007:
Wow! A very creative and gut-wrenching story! I would love a sequel to this! Perfect 10!
Author's Response: Aw thank you sweetie.
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{reviewid: 1523554, reviewer: 'octoberose'}
19th July 2007:
You are an incredible writer and you have the cutest banners. This was one of the best stories I've ever read! And your stories are so in touch with the character's emotions- something I can't write in my stories to save my life. Kudos to you, CelticKisses!
Author's Response: Thank you so much love!
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{reviewid: 1430957, reviewer: 'hp_addicts'}
24th May 2007:
wow i never saw that coming. great job =]
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie ^_^
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{reviewid: 1414846, reviewer: 'T%20vivacious'}
12th May 2007:
"i couldn't even get to the end of the hall" is my favorite quote. it shows their helplessness without each other, and the ending is great too. aawww, you're being added to my favorite authors list because i love so many of you stories!
Author's Response: Aw Im very glad to hear that you liked this story! Thank you very much!
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{reviewid: 1413335, reviewer: 'myztik'}
11th May 2007:
that was so sweet. so sad. so perfect. i loved it. love is clutching at my heart... squeezing it... making me cry. :)
Author's Response: Aw thank you myztik, sweetie.
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