Muggle technology and primitive culture...wow. And Lightning People? Oh the eternal love. *grins*

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Looking good so far. I eagerly await more.

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wow !

Brillaint chapter, more twistas in this story than Nagini has !

Dumbeldave

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I love all the romance in this one. Especially Ron and Hermione's kiss. But also, so many new things to be worried about-Malfoy's loose, cannibals have appeared, and Harry got grazed by an arrow enough to bleed...don't keep me in suspense, update ASAP!

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Awesome Story, can't wait for the next chapter!

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wow what a great chapter ! I wasnt sure where this was going to go after last chapter but this was great. DAVE

Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it. Chapter six is well under way. Thanks for the great review!

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Well done, very well-described chapter. I'm curious to know who set Malfoy free...extremely well written with Ron and Hermione. Can't wait to find out more in the next chapter!

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Very Narnia like story you got going on here. lol. I like it so far though, update soon!

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hey this is good, this chapter is a bit confusing but it works. keep writing plz and update sson

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interesting chapter , update soon before curiosity consumes me completely please ;)

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its kind of like narnia the lion the witch and the watdrobe anyway ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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Whoa, that's weird. Why can't they do magic? What's going on? Please update this soon; my curiosity is insatiable!

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Ah, now on this chapter the others aren't so lazy with the reviews. Great! And so was the chappie! My favorite part was Ginny kissing Harry in the...well...the loo. (The kiss, not the location, mind you..)

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Oh, that was so scary! Thank heavens Harry and Ginny were okay. There were a lot of really sweet details in this chapter, like about Harry's two army men, and Aunt Petunia's goodbye hug. And also, that whole thing about Ginny being a secret (well, not secret any more, but whatever) Animagus was really cool. Plus that bit of info about cats being able to see through Invisibility Cloaks was very interesting. What is the matter with the others on this site? I can't review enough! And there was only one before me on this chapter...So weird. but anyway, I love!

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Only three reviews for what is destined to be a truly great fic? Outrage! Well, now there are four, and this one says GREAT!

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Wow what a cool twst to this story ! Excellent ! DAve

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I've just finished reading all three chapters and I'm very impressed. You have really captured all the characters and the plot is very well thought out. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Brilliant ! I simply cant wait for more. Thisis an awesome story ! DAVE

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This truly was a great chapter. You have documented exceptional detail, My hat is off to you. Dumbeldave

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Brilliant first chapter, very well written and the length was pretty good. I look forward to reading many more chapters. Dumbeldave

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Great chapter. I think you captured everyone's personalities brilliantly. Keep it up, I'm off to the next chapter!

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WOW! You're really good at capturing everything! If it wasn't slander I would say that you are better than J.K.R. I just read it and-WOW! It's AWESOME! It feels like I just read a Harry Potter book! WOW! Please finish writing it! I would love to see what you write! E-mail me at lemonysnicketrulz@yahoo.com when you write more! Please! You are really good!

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well done brilliant. this is really good. plz update soon cause i would like to know what happens next

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Great story! I'm definitely adding it to my favourites! I cannot wait for the next chapter! ~Anastasia

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