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Review #1, by Fish and Bird

9th December 2006:

A short but interesting chapter which I think could be worked into something longer (and still interesting). Neville is so seldom explored by fanfic writers and when he is used it's normally for comic relief. This painted him as a more thoughtful, believable character. Good stuff!

Author's Response: Ah thanks. I keep meaning to update this but never get round to it, one day maybe... nevertheless thankyou for reviewing :)

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Review #2, by LostMaeblleshire

tea and blue tartan

23rd January 2006:

Ooh! I was just browsing the Recently Added list, and look what I've found! *squeals in glee* I really love that Neville is the character to meet her. It seems so natural for him to be at St. Mungo's... His and Laura's interaction was wonderful, by the way. It just seemed to flow so naturally, I can tell that this is going to be an excellent story! I'm so glad that you took up the challenge! ^_^

Author's Response: Ooh yay! Reviews. :D It does seem natural for Neville to be there doesn't it, that's really why I chose him, otherwise I'd've had to think up an elaborate sub-plot explaining what two handsome young men were doing wandering the halls of st. mungos... second chapter here we come :S

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Review #3, by Sophia Montgomery

tea and blue tartan

22nd January 2006:

Interesting interaction between the OC and Neville. . . I like how he's trying to be nice.

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