{reviewid: 2471435, reviewer: 'chickoftheblackroses'}
27th January 2011:
macgonagl is spelled Mcgonagle
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{reviewid: 2471433, reviewer: 'chickoftheblackroses'}
27th January 2011:
um what happened to pansy trying to kill hermione what happened to hermione and draco making love what happens with clarissa and ron. what does the dark lord do when he finds out that draco is not with clarissa. how does draco's family take it.
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{reviewid: 1042510, reviewer: 'adesperatecryforhelp'}
29th June 2006:
ohhh...pardon my french but PANSY IS A BITCH! lol well keep up the writing! im excited to finish reading it! oh and its McGonagall...you kept switching up the spelling! well nice story!
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{reviewid: 1042500, reviewer: 'adesperatecryforhelp'}
29th June 2006:
OMFG! i hate luciuis...but again my only comment is use a spell/grammer checker...personally i type mine out on microsoft word and fix it in there then i come post it here and fix the spacing and what-not! well hope it helped!
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{reviewid: 1042494, reviewer: 'adesperatecryforhelp'}
29th June 2006:
well...a word of advice....i'd use a spell checker...then the chapters will get validated easier and so on and so forth...but you story is a little thick...its kinda of one of those 'im getting right to the ponit' stories...i would jsut add a little more to it...well hope i helped!=]
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{reviewid: 478094, reviewer: 'TheNextDarkLord'}
27th April 2005:
OMG!!! Must have next chapter. I beg of you; hurry up!
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{reviewid: 460589, reviewer: 'Tiffany'}
15th April 2005:
hi this is really good could u like email me about updates?!?!?! my email is swim_babeh@hotmail.com
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{reviewid: 282504, reviewer: 'Emma%20Watson'}
2nd December 2004:
..umm..It was very interesting to read.Be sure to make more chapters!And keep up the good work!
-Em
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{reviewid: 165472, reviewer: 'dreamy%20gurl'}
5th June 2004:
NEXT CHAPTER PLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT TO READ IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 159386, reviewer: 'Draco%27s%20Best%20Luva'}
26th May 2004:
Ya know it's kinda stupid that u posted so long ago & haven't updated in a while.So I say this with all due respect 4 ur writing:
I SWEAR IF U DON'T UPDATE SOON, I'LL FRY UR ASS,HOTHITS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 153471, reviewer: 'All%20American'}
16th May 2004:
Wow, I think this one is my favorite story. Its not like all the other ones. They like all have sex in it. It's nastifying. HEHE Thats my new word.I hope Hermione kicks Pansy's fat lard to the ground. I think Lucias is awesome too.
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{reviewid: 67325, reviewer: 'Extremesun25'}
7th September 2003:
keep on writing this is a good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 65539, reviewer: '%3F%3F%3F'}
29th August 2003:
MWA AH HA HA HA HA HA HA AH HA HA HA HA HA
you are soooooooooooooooooooo evil. i like that in stories.
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{reviewid: 59825, reviewer: 'Anon'}
28th August 2003:
i did enjoy the idea of this story but im sorry to say that you seriously need to check on your spelling and grammar.
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{reviewid: 57662, reviewer: 'sarah'}
27th August 2003:
grand story i hope you keep writing it it really is going somewhere i\'m not sure where--lol but somewhere
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{reviewid: 65818, reviewer: 'mhareelin'}
27th August 2003:
hello, hothits!!! i like your story, of course! but Draco wouldn\'t appreciate being called Drakie, Pansy is ssooooooo annoying!! well, good luck!
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{reviewid: 62497, reviewer: 'serenity'}
17th August 2003:
it was so good keep writing!!!:)
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{reviewid: 59941, reviewer: 'Jenny'}
11th August 2003:
I look forward to read the rest of the story. You are very talented at this.
Keep up the good work. And I have an upcoming story also. It`s called
After All Those Years. Hope you read it this weekend when it`s up.
hope to read more from you. Peace Out!!
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{reviewid: 60792, reviewer: 'Jenny'}
10th August 2003:
Hey.. I just finished reading, and I always loooooove it when
Draco is suffering because he love hermione soo much and she
doesn`t wanna have anything to do with him..
great story.. hope u write more..
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{reviewid: 51763, reviewer: 'SilverMirror'}
16th July 2003:
I liked it a lot, and good ending! :)
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{reviewid: 48138, reviewer: 'Krissy'}
1st July 2003:
That was great keep on going, I like the story!
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{reviewid: 36172, reviewer: 'ILUVTOM%28megan%29'}
30th June 2003:
i luved it sooooooo much
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{reviewid: 47395, reviewer: 'SilverMirror'}
26th June 2003:
Hey, that was a really good chapter. Poor Draco and hermine! But i think you made a little typo; ^^^\"and was that really the most apropirate thing to do\" Dumbledore yelled at Draco who just simply yawned.^^^ Don\'t you mean, snape said that? Because a second later, Snape sends him to see Dumbeldore...not before. Sorry, I don\'t mean to sound pushy, just thought you\'d want to know. Please write moor soon! :)
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{reviewid: 47405, reviewer: '%2AKAT%2A'}
26th June 2003:
well about the last chapter
it was dumledore that Draco was talking to he had a flashback in dumbledroes office remembering when he was sent to dumbledores office
is that cleared up hope so
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{reviewid: 47438, reviewer: 'mrningglry'}
26th June 2003:
Wowie wow. this is pretty good! If you like draco/hermione, l have a buncha stories for you!:-D keeep going!
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