Why is James pretending to be asleep? Poor Sirius and Regulus.
I really hope that you're continuing with this story, I would love to see how it ends :-D Report Review
Rebecca and Remus seriously need to jump each other and James is so cute! Report Review
I liked the snowball fight and James walking in on Lily was funny.
I can't wait to see his plan! Report Review
That poor mouse! Ouch why's Rebecca being nasty? Oh yeah the Yule ball.
I love how cute the Potter twins are. It's funny because HArry does inherit those features! :-D Report Review
Go Peter! Argh Sirius and Marissa need to get together as well! The conversation between them was so sad :-( Report Review
Ahh! Lily used the spell Remus uses in the movie, I adore the marauders so much!
Oh no Remus needs to go out with Rebecca! Report Review
The boys ambushing sounds so funny! I loved Sirius in this, he's so hilarious. Yay! James wants Lily!! Report Review
Trust them all to make bets about Daphne and Lily.
Hahah Rebecca threatening is so funny.
:-O That line was from Hook! Report Review
Yay James is finally being nice, I feel so sorry for Remus having to go through transformations. I think James should set up Remus and Rebecca! Report Review
I'm not liking how mean James is, The fight between Rebecca and James was so funny. They're such children. Glad Sirius took over. Report Review
Omg a Ravenclaw mosh pit! And Snapes intricate robot? Hilarious! I love it! Report Review
Haha Stalker Sirius! And wow at Sirius being serious. James's girlfriend talks a lot. I'm so glad he apologised to the marauders, what have they done? Report Review
Oh James adding more to the story with Remus and Rebecca and taking out his anger at people. James is so mean! Report Review
no! Can't believe James overheard that! Sirius has grown up.
Yes sabotage! Report Review
Rebecca and James are very alike :-D and Remus and rebecca are so cute! Report Review
Oh no Remus! I don't want the marauders to fight. Report Review
Marauders quiet? Crazy talk.
I love seeing Peter in animagus form, Poor Peter though.
Oh my god poor SIrius! The girls are so funny drunk Report Review
NO! Lily caught James kissing Daphne.
I love James and Lily arguing, I wonder what's in the trunk? Report Review
Lily I think is overreacting, I hope she apologises soon, and MArissa is definately pining after Sirius. Report Review
James no! Don't hurt Remus like that, although that leaves Remus time with Rebecca :-D Report Review
Oh no Rebecca and Lily are arguing, I don't want them arguing. No she's arguing with Marissa too.
Oh no James Remus likes Daphne don't do it. Report Review
Yes! I love the arguing and the kissing! But no he can't be done with her :-( Lily why did you have to slap him? Report Review
I would probably be like Katherin if I was playing Quidditch. I love that they can communicate like that! I need a twin!
Yes! Rebecca likes Remus! So happy that they had that potion :-D Report Review
I can't believe they thought the boys would go, can't believe Marissa is stuck in a window! Report Review
She's getting another tattoo? I can't wait for James to find out... and there he is finding out! Report Review
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