ok. no seriously dont tell me your abandoning this one too. and dont say maybe! u must continue! both stories, this and a collection of broken fairytails (which is EVEN better) are boths favourites! and many people review! please do not aboandon it! this story can go sssssooooo far! Author's Response: Okay, fine! I'll write the next chapter, we'll see how it goes and if I get more than reviews (which I think is pitiful), I'll see if I can write more, okay? The next chapter is dedicated to you! XxX Ya! Report Review
confused but goodAuthor's Response: Honey, I think everyone was confused... But thanks for reviewing! It's made my day perfect... OXOX Report Review
i am still extremely confused, although i luvluvluv the dialogues between j+l and e+s!!! so sexy/lovelyAuthor's Response: Hahahahahahahahaha...
I know you can't see me, but I'm blushing and laughing at the same time. Really? Well, I guess it pays off to dig through my old un-used plot ideas for dialogue that really pops. XXX, Minty Report Review
yes, you are holding back a lot. i am extremely confusedAuthor's Response: I know, but how do I create cliffies without all those unanswered questions? When they get answered, it's time for a new cliffie that leaves you on the edge of your seat... Report Review
i think it was a really and truly brilliant story!! my only problem is why is sirius calling mrs potter mum? i mean, i assume he moved out from his family to james's but he wouldnt call her mum, i dont think. what language was thta in? and great cliffie, btw...Author's Response: Mum? That's british. I think he would call her Mum. It's a very son-ish touch as he adapts to his "real" family. Report Review
Nope! Au contrair, I am quite glad for an update :) Good chapter. Ummmm... what else...... have fun writing the next chapter! Author's Response: Cool! At least one of my good reviewers isn't mad at me! Updates are...somewhere in the time stream. Things will be easier when my teachers stop giving me homework!
OXOX, Minty Report Review
i llike ur story but its confusing. in the broken fairy tales cynthia w.e is a princess anot a servent, and also i thought in chap 3, laura goes out with remus, y is she setting him up w. antoher girl? also if ellie thought the first letter was corny wouldnt she think this was to? and wats with the letter thing, u no where ellie and lily aand laura collasped? and y were the girls surprised at how early laura wako up if laura wakes up at 5:00 everyday? please answer these ?'s and update soon (but pleae try not to make it so confusing) i luv ur story and rate it annnn 8 (onlyfor the confusion otherwise mtotal ten) thanx! update soon! reply to this w. answerws please! thanx! bye!Author's Response: Ummm...They were different stories, even though I used the same characters and backgrounds...But I'll try for your challenge and try to come up with answers off the top of my head. Please note that my answers may seem bizzare.
Well, she's only called a "princess" because it's rather polite and well...maybe Ellie was trying to get on the good side of Mr. and Mrs. Black. She's a servant in Hogwarts because no Mr. and Mrs. Black means no power goes to Cynthia.
She only went out with Remus to get Lily to go out with James, remember? So this doesn't really count. She's trying to get some work experience by settting Remus up with another girl because she knows it would mean everything to Remus to have his dream girl. Sweet or not?
The first letter WAS corny. I hated it, but you know I had to write some sappy poem written by someone extremely inexperienced. The second letter is very well thought out. Everything matched Lily's hair. The poem was a little bit more well thought out, although you have your own opinions, of course. And I think Ellie was a bit...dreamy from the whole Divination thing. You know the Divination drill. Be dreamy.
The whole thing where they collapsed with actually tie into the story later. You'll see. It was the charm that made them collapse, not the letter. The letter was just what Ellie's parents sent after they heard what happened to their daughter. The charm is very important when it comes to what happened to Belle. You'll see. ; )
They were not surprised that Lauren woke up early. They were surprised that she didn't take her time, as she usually did with her make-up and clothes and everything. After all, it's not every day a beauty queen becomes the sensible school girl.
Hope you're less confused! OXOX, Minty
whooot! go remus and lauren :) great chapter! wow, lots of secrets! i have to go now. update SOON, minty!! please? *begs* I don't beg often, either....Author's Response: Yays! Updating? Um... I can try, but I'm not promising anything! Have you ever met the test-anxious-demons/teachers like mine? *sigh* But I'm... 30% done with chapter 4, so things are looking up! Report Review
hi, minty! sorry I've been away for.. well... a forever-like-time..... :( my fault! Ah well. let me tell you this: i loved the chapter, it made me laugh out loud at parts and freaked me out at parts.... but you're doing great!Author's Response: Cool! It freaked me out half-way, but I couldn't resist putting it in the fic and wellz, I'm horrible at handling my weird plot ideas. Report Review
quite confusing but very goodAuthor's Response: Oops. I'll try to get rid of the confusion. Report Review
[not signed in] sorry. Awesome chapter:) please update asap, mmkay? I`ll be waiting;)<3Author's Response: I'll try! But I did update today, when I'm finally ready to face all my readers... Report Review
oooo......mg. How many bloody questions? woah. Hope you answer them ALL! in the next chapter. lol.
xxxAuthor's Response: I know! I was so shocked when I actually wrote them all down... Report Review
Aw, go on! Update... please? I like it!Author's Response: Awww, that's nice... I'm actually blushing! Report Review
aww, i like it :] i'm going to add you to my favs! Update asap :]Author's Response: OMG, you don't know how much that really means to me! Thank you SO SO much! XOXO, Minty Report Review
really good! update soon x)Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try! Report Review
I like it! Pleast continue!Author's Response: I'll try, but it's going to be a long wait... I'm SO busy... *sob* Report Review
kinda odd but goodAuthor's Response: Odd? Hmmmm... No one's said that before... How do I make it un-odd? Report Review
do another chapter!! sounds good. Report Review
do another chapter!! sounds good.Author's Response: Oh, that's so sweet! Yes, I know... But this story was especially hard to even start, let alone post... Hope to see you next chapter! Report Review
excellent keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you! You're really kind... I'm horribly afraid when I don't get reviews... *sigh* Report Review
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