awww cute! such a sweet ending. luv it!Author's Response: Thanks!!! I appreicate all the support! Report Review
That was great I loved it. I really liked the poem parts, it sounds really good. Great work!Author's Response: Thanks!!! The poem came first and then I decided to expand it...appreciate the review! Report Review
awwwww how lovely....Author's Response: :-) Report Review
very good. short and sweet.Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Report Review
NiCe!... I like it... I'm usually not a fan of poems but this is actually pretty good!....Author's Response: Thank you! Poetry can be really really icky, so I tried to make mine bearable! Report Review
the end!...fin!...woohoo!...good job man!...lol ^_^Author's Response: Thanks. I liked it and I never like my stuff. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed! Report Review
so far, i think this is the longest chapter of all the previous ones...hehe...lol ^_^Author's Response: Yeah, this was kinda a short story, but that's how I wanted it....this is how thoughts come to us, see? Thanks! Report Review
i guess all the chapters in here are short...but it's ok, don't worry...lol ^_^Author's Response: Yeah, they're all short, but don't worry, I never do. Report Review
another short chapter...lol ^_^Author's Response: Yeah, they're all that way, lol. Report Review
short...very short chapter...lol ^_^Author's Response: Yep. :-) Report Review
hi...i really...Really...REALLY like you're poem...it's very nice and original...good job! lol ^_^Author's Response: Thanks! If you like this poem, I'm on www.poetry.com, but for my name if you want to read more of my stuff (it's published in the UK!) you'll have to email me and you can do that through the site. thanks for the review! Report Review
short but sweetAuthor's Response: Thanks, and I'm usually long winded, so this is a nice break...more stream of consious thing. Report Review
Really original idea. I like it. I can't wait for the "pulliung away from passion" I beiev that's next...? Hmmm, well, keep writing!!Author's Response: Um, I gotta check...I'm writing and posting and reading reviews on three different computers, so I'll have to check! Yeah, I think that's next...probably will be a longer chapter then too...glad you like this story! Report Review
whats an orb? i like it, good jobAuthor's Response: Orb is another word for eye. Think about it :-) Report Review
This one is better!! Keep posting!
Good Job!Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Report Review
I'm srry to say this really I am but all the poem is saying is Harry's looking at Hermione and that orb thing! Sorry if that offended you!!!Author's Response: Offended? Nah, I am glad people speak their minds. Anyway, as my AP Lit teacher would say "you obviously do not understand what this poem is saying." I'd say it more of "yeah, Harry's looking at Hermione, check out how she's looking back at him" with her eyes (the orbs.) Thanks for the review! Report Review
I like the idea of how you're doing this one. it is different, which is good.
Author's Response: Thanks. I meant to work on some of my other stories, but this one wouldn't leave me alone...*sigh* I'm off to update some others! Thanks! Report Review
i reeeeeeeeli like it! im not normally a hermione harry shipper, but this rox babe! update soon! and cud ya maybe check out sum of mah fics? merci! byebyexox Luv SpiritxoxoAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm not a Harry/Hermione person either, but "Ron's Looking at Hermione" doesn't have the same ring, and I'm a poet at heart. I'll be sure to check out your fics! Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
That's neat. Different. I like it, though I can't really explain it, since I'm not usually into the whole "they're in love in the first chapter" thing. It's neat though, and I've got a feeling this'll unfold veyr nicely.
Loving it much,
--KateAuthor's Response: Thanks. Yeah, the whole "they're in love in the first chapter" thing gets me too, considering I'm not even a Harry/Hermione shipper! Anyway, thanks. Report Review
Hey, I like this story!
But whenare you gonna UPDATE "You're The Ration One"??
That is a very good story and very clever!! PLEASE UP DATE BOTH OF THESE STORIES!!!Author's Response: Yes ma'am, working on both as we speak, owing to the fact that I have a whole three hours of "free" time (I really should be doing my Hamlet report...) and thank you for the review... Report Review
nice poem, story needed though. And quick, while my sanity lasts!Author's Response: We'll talk sanity after musical is over. In the meantime...enjoy my other stories. Report Review
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