very nicely written, good use of words.bit confusing though when they answer different questions in the same sentence.Author's Response: Yeah. I'm still working on trying to make it better flow with two writers. Thanks for the Review! -Jennee WoodAuthor's Response: Yeah. I'm still working on trying to make it better flow with two writers. Thanks for the Review! -Jennee Wood Report Review
Pretty good plot so far but the staory doesn't flow to well I noticedAuthor's Response: Interesting opinion. Thanks for the review. - Ella Burns (The insane one) Report Review
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