Reading Reviews for Sneaking Around In The Night
  
17 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Felicity_Potter Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

4th September 2005:
coool :) please update soon

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Review #2, by punkrockfrog Say What?

12th April 2005:
i love it. update soon!

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Review #3, by InnerJoy Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

6th February 2005:
cool please update as soon as you can!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #4, by alicia Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

24th January 2005:
this is an excellant story! keep writing it!

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Review #5, by misspotter Onto Hogwarts

31st August 2004:
wow.. i dont usually read teacher/student but that was really good

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Review #6, by Blue Malfoy Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

29th July 2004:
i hope hermione's dream comes true!! hurry and update~~!!

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Review #7, by Blue Malfoy Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

19th July 2004:
loved it hurry and update!!!

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Review #8, by Evil Darkness Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

7th July 2004:
good story. i'd like to see more chapters....

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Review #9, by Nicole Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

7th June 2004:
I really like it! I think you should play up the whole secretive thing, instead of the whole i'm inlove with you, oh dear, he hates me thing. maybe have some complicated things with ppl finding out. I really like the style of writing though, keep up the awesome work!!!!!!

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Review #10, by Niki Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

28th May 2004:
I like it! i like it alot! keep going! i don't know fif i can wait too long!

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Review #11, by Blah Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

10th March 2004:
This is a little impossible

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Review #12, by Luna_Lovegood Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

21st February 2004:
could u please update soon?

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Review #13, by krcool Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

25th December 2003:
that's pretty good! and pleases stay to writing more lupin/hermione stories,because you're good at them and the world needs lupin/hermione stories! i would if i could but i have no sense of imagination. so please stay to your 'calling' as you call it.

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Review #14, by Chloe Onto Hogwarts

7th November 2003:
gr8 story!

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Review #15, by mundungus fletcher Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

4th November 2003:
Hey...I saw your posting and decided to read it. Well, I actually don't mind Remus/Hermione but I don't really like it when they kiss so early on...you know? Besides, I know it's meant to be fiction....;-). However, I want to point out something. If you meant to do this, I'm really sorry, okay? If you didn't...well, I'm just telling you. Now, the thing is, the characters don't seem like themselves. I mean, yeah, Remus is still quite a sensitive guy, and Hermione is really intelligent, but all the swearing and yelling; it seems like it's something Harry would do...or Sirius...you know? Remus and Hermione though...they'd sit down and talk it through. Calmly. Well, the grammar is quite good (better than lots of the stories on hpff...I mean, you'd think they'd get a beta!!) and the spelling isn't bad...but a question: where would Hermione pick up the American slang? I mean, I get the fact that she can know American words, but Hermione is so soundly British, I can't imagine her speaking American slang. However, if you do want her to be speaking American slang (and hey, it's your fic! you can do what you like) you should show it. There's this sign in our school "Don't TELL me how good you are; SHOW me." (Yes, I know it sounds funny). But, it does make sense. Instead of saying, "she was good at maths", you say, "in maths class she excelled. Her homework was always flawless, and her classwork was outstanding...." You get my drift? I'm sorry if I'm sounding all corny....but I'm trying to help you out, yeah? Anyway. Keep it up! And bear in mind the tips I gave you. Please don't be offended....;-). P.S. I LOVE your author's notes...they're so cool! "*looks at bank statement*" LOL! Bye!

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Review #16, by CaptainCocoaPuff Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

4th November 2003:
Interesting... I've always liked Hermione/Lupin fics, they seem like the perfect couple (save the fact that he's so much older). More!

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Review #17, by meghan Sorting, Kissing, and Some Stuff.

4th November 2003:
this is a good story you should add more chapters

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