good story.. but it moves kind of quickly Report Review
Well, it moved too fast, it had a lot of good points though it wasn\'t as good as your other stories. Sorry, I just liked your other stuff better, lol. :) Please keep writing stories! I look forward to your other stuff, especially the dream one. Report Review
It\'s good, I like it, interesting style, cool. But I wonder...doesn\'t Ginny seem overly friendly and understanding towards Draco? She isn\'t even his good acquaintance yet and she\'s treating him like an old friend. You could say she\'s just that sweet and sensitive, but I don\'t think so. It\'s just too early in the story, but that is just my option. Otherwise very good. Keep writing! Report Review
dude this is adorable?! please write more!!!and please read some of mine if you get a chance! Report Review
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