Hey, this is Star Potter on my new account that I share with my friend, Tabbi. Just call me JB, Gooby! I have written 2 stories, now, but one's on my S.P. account, and one's on this one...well, right now it's awaiting to be validated. Those are one-shots, and then I've started a chappy story. R&R!
BTW, I like it. Nice job, girlio!Author's Response: Hey Chickie! I am reading your stories right now! Niiiice.
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Really good start, can't wait to read more! Report Review
That was good, Gabriella. I really liked it!! If you want anything, you can email me at I would love to read some more of this!!! Report Review
okay, I read it this time...it was really good. short but good.
hey, listen, "Mollie", this was good but you had some run-on sentences, here and there, you know what I mean? if you want, email me and I'll beta it for you! (you know, like edit it a bit, just the grammar.)
I really enjoyed this!!! I hope Ginny is okay!Author's Response: Chickie my name is Gabriella ( Gooby for short) not mollie my friend put that on there but thanks for reviewing....again! Report Review
hey...good.Author's Response: Thanks Chickie! Report Review
WHAT!!!!!!!! you've got to be kidding me!!!!!!! where is Ginny I DEMAND TO KNOW!!!!!!!!! so i got a bit carried a way! that has to be the best cliff hanger ever!!!!! you really need to update...NOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! there i go agian, carried away!!! sorry! 10/10 p.s. updateAuthor's Response: I'm working on it.... Thanks for the review I'm having a bit of a writers block!!
i think its going great!!
i really want to read the restAuthor's Response: Thanks.I'm really glad you liked it!!!
I'm working on the next chapter. Report Review
You did wonderful!
Keep it up!Author's Response: Tahnks for the wonderful review im working on the next chapter!!!
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