Way too cute :)
well done Report Review
I really like this story, it's short, so I'm waiting "Why didn' t you male it longer?" I'm your new fangirl. :DAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks! Before it was actually way shorter. Haha, but thanks anyways. I really appriciate it :) Report Review
O_o this is so random...but Its Alex from msn, I feel strangely stalkerish but Im not stalking lols...Author's Response: Hahahahahaha! WOW! Its VERY random!!! I can't believe you found this. :S How'd you do that? Report Review
I L-O-V-E your story! Not your story, your stories. All of your stories are exquisite! :]Author's Response: Exquisite... What a nice word :) Thanks so much!!! Your review means A LOOOOOT to me! Report Review
It's a funny story. I like it a lot.Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! *blushes and giggles* Report Review
love this story!Author's Response: Thaaanks, Megs! :]] Report Review
ive noticed u have a lot of one-shot stories...enter in my competition pleez, i adore ure stories and hope to see that i got an email from u!!!!!! :)Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I'll look at your competition...thanks again! :D Report Review
lol..................thats priceless................lmao....................i like Lily's excuse to........sounds like something i would do........hehehe great story!!Author's Response: Haha.....................thanks..............nice periods. ;) Report Review
that was really cute! it made me smile. it was realistic in the way boys act, remus wasn't a total nerd, and lily wasn't really mean. it was one of the best lily james one shots.Author's Response: :D Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! I really tried hard to capture the character's true personalities, and I guess I did it right then? :) Thanks again! Report Review
poor James...if i were him, i would KILL sirius
anyway... love the story, hope to read more very soon
keep up the great workAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
poor james...got rejected the first time he asked lily out. i like the story, keep up the good workAuthor's Response: Oh, yes. Poor James. Haha, thanks! Report Review
It's not really as JK Rowling made him, but this is a fan fic, so have it as you wish and it's written pretty well.Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm glad you understand the meaning of FANfiction. A lot of reviewers don't. Report Review
i likes itAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
i think ive reviewed this before, hmm. anyways, awesome!
*~SammY~*Author's Response: We all love double reviews. :) Thanks! Report Review
well, i think u should keep going as i seen u pointed out before and its a bit short and ends in a sliff-hanger spot. But i shouldn't be complaining, my stoay, Abagail & Conny is super short! w/e
good story other then that! Hope keep going along with it!Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, I really appriciate your views! Actually, I AM going to continue this! Wheew whoooo! Haha, thanks again! Report Review
my two points of view...
1. YOU SUCK!! OMG why did you have to end it!!!
2. That was an AWESOME lil fic. i loved it lol... seriously..
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! That first point scared me! Yeah, I'm thinking about continueing it. I just might do it! Soooo, keep your eyes open! ;) Report Review
Nicely written makes me want a sequel.Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I've been thinking about either making a sequel or continuing this into a longer one shot...hmm... Report Review
I'm really quite surprised I've never reviewed this... It seems like I've read it before, and i tend to review.... so.... weird. Good story.Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
wow....very cute and i never would have thought of that. would explain Harry's luck with girls. lol.
LMW 10/10 in favesAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks so much!!! :D Report Review
'“Ooooh, Lily!” he called as he ran down the corridor to Lily’s compartment.' LOVED that. Too good. Well done! I loved the whole thing :) Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I think its a bit on the short side..hmm..ah, oh well. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
:]:]. thats all i have to sayAuthor's Response: Smiles are good! Thanks! *smiles back* Report Review
I LOVED THIS IDEA... hahaha charming a bottle so they know when someone is lying! hahaha he couldn't get away! And Sirius running to find lily at the end of the story... classic... on i go to another of your brilliant l/j one-shots... also, Niz did I wonderful job on every one of your banners... they are very special =)Author's Response: Lol, thanks so much! I'm sorry I kind of left the fic hanging, but I wanted the readers to use their imaginations and think of their own ways that the fic could have ended. Hehe, and, yes, niZ is a wonderful banner-maker! *giggles* I'm in love with her banners...*blushes* Lol, thanks again! Report Review
Ok, you need NEED to listent to listen to me!! NEED TO!!! Please PLEASE make this longer, or maybe not even a one shot! This was so good, the kind of story that leaves me hooked!! I have to know what happens!!! even if it's just to where Lily hears!! Longer than that even would be nice but I'll take what I can get!!! PLEASE!!! I'm begging you!!! Yeah, I know, it's really pathetic of me, but I need to know!!!haha
MakenzieAuthor's Response: Haha, I have considered making it longer. I just need to get inspired first! Haha, so check back to this story to see if it's updated! Report Review
Hehehe... but I want to know how Lily reacts, aw now I'm kinda sad... :'(Author's Response: Haha, yeah. I wanted the readers to be creative and think of their own way in which Lily would react! :P Thanks for reviewing! :P Report Review
HOTTY JAMES WAS NEVER SHY!!!!
HE WAS SO HOT AND POPULAR!!!!
EVERYONE KNEW HE LOVED LILY SINCE LIKE 3RD YEAR!!!!
DUHHHHH.....!!!!!Author's Response: grrrrrr....okay, well, i've read EVERY harry potter book, like, 8 times and NOT ONCE did it say when james started liking lily.
errmm...and it never said that james was shy... this story was just ONE DAY in the life of james potter and it just took place in the very early morning. tell me, are you ever outgoing and hyper in the early morning? cuzz...well, most of hte people i meet are tired and grumpy in the morning. And i pry know why you're so crabby about this story, it's cuz james got sad, right? well, he was sad because someone just told him that the person he liked didn't want to wish him a happy birthday because she was too busy clipping her toe nails. you would be sad/mad/not outgoing if somene told you that, too. so...just try to see it from a different stnad point. thank you. Report Review
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