7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by FroBoy imprisoned

7th November 2003:
Great start!!! Try to double space cuz its easier for ppl to read that way. Plz update soon!!!!!

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Review #2, by j imprisoned

4th November 2003:
hey umm good story righ tmore soon

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Review #3, by SarahLupin imprisoned

4th November 2003:
Great start! Keep up the good work!! =)

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Review #4, by Ash imprisoned

4th November 2003:
Gr8 beginning! :) hope u upd8 soon! :)

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Review #5, by LogicalRaven imprisoned

3rd November 2003:
I really like your concept, BUT I think you're trying to force your writing. Relax and let the words flow. If this is honestly the first thing you've ever written, WOW! Keep up the good work, take your time, and let the magic of storytelling be your guide.

Author's Response: thanks for the advise and this honestly is the first story I have ever written!

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Review #6, by LogicalRaven imprisoned

3rd November 2003:
I really like your concept, BUT I think you're trying to force your writing. Relax and let the words flow. If this is honestly the first thing you've ever written, WOW! Keep up the good work, take your time, and let the magic of storytelling be your guide.

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Review #7, by sarily imprisoned

3rd November 2003:
!! looks like a great beginning! keep writing so i can find out what happens!

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