Wow this was such an intense chapter!
i just found this story and i have to say im already
completely obsessed with it. Your an amazing writer
and i hope you update soon!! Report Review
AGH NO get rid of Jay!!! REMMUS! loll i love the story so far! Report Review
hm...makes me think of the show Grey's Anatomy.they have a lot of s-e-x...and I mean A LOT...10/10 even though I don't like JayAuthor's Response: thankyou. Bxxx Report Review
*gr*...I don't like Jay...He's a Barry-Dru (manly Mary-Sue) in my opinion...he's too perfect...*gr*Author's Response: yeah he pisses me off too! Report Review
really enjoyed reading the whole thing , very cute!Author's Response: thankyou very much. Report Review
please do a sequal pleaseAuthor's Response: maybe i will one day, but i can't see it. Report Review
ok...the chappie is kinda short, but i guess it fills everything we need to know about tonks and remus and jay...kinda sad actually that it is not remus' baby, but you can't really change thatAuthor's Response: I know... i was very tempted to make it remus' baby, all happy endingy. the next chapter will be longer, i promise! thanks, Bee Report Review
I can tell you didn't rehearse.Author's Response: i know, sorry... busy few weeks.... Bee Report Review
personal experience? i know exactly what you mean, i could basically relate to all of this (except the dead exs part), but still, i know how tonks feels at this point...and jay is naughty, i don't like him.Author's Response: thank god, i thought i was the only one who picked stupid, jealous, naughty men... i'm glad i hae company in that particular club- i was starting to feel lonely! thanks for reiewing, Bee Report Review
YAY YAY I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!! oh and by the way might now me by my other sn katieweasley sooooo hi finolly u updated YAYYYYYY update soon did i mention that i love you?Author's Response: sorry sorry sorry.... i had exams and went travelling, etc., etc.... but i'm back now and i've almosdt finished the next chapter (round of slow applause for bee!).... thankyou so much for reading and reviewing, Bee
and by the way if u have ten minutes read my new story "The miracles of marriage and ......." i'd really value an opinion because i've no idea if its complete drivel, or a work of genius!!! ;)
thanks, Bee Report Review
what happened here? r u like finished? plz write more
Author's Response: i've been studying and doing exams but i'm back now.... and the next chaptter is almost finished!!! thanks for reading, Bee Report Review
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO it can't be over it cant be fine but u have to do a sequal PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ill do anythingAuthor's Response: Sorry.... sorry.... sorry.... i've been studying and doing exams... but i'm back and the next chapter is almost finished... thanks for reading and reviewing so faithfully, Bee Report Review
I love how you’ve gotten them back together how they did – with all the fighting and stuff… I’m a bit surprised that Tonks felt guilty over dumping Jay and thought for a split second about getting back with him and leaving Remus, but there ya go.Author's Response: she was more guilty about how she almost used him, and cheated on him...
by the way watch this space on the whole, yay their back together thing, it could change!!! Thanks, Bee Report Review
Well, I didn’t plan to review any chapter individually from these ones… But I had to for this one. First of all, I think you have portrayed Jay’s jealously absolutely fantastically – and yes it is fairly obvious it’s from experience lol – and the way that Tonks got annoyed with him first, especially because she’s so stubborn… The one thing I would suggest is that you could have hinted a little at Jay’s jealously a little in the earlier chapters – subtly so that Tonks doesn’t get it, but maybe readers could read between the lines… Maybe you have done that, and I just didn’t get that, because I was reading this late last night, so yeah… Just something to think about! Anyway, I’m off to read the next, what, 20 chapters!!!!Author's Response: thank you... i did think about having his jealousy earlier on, and i might still change it, but as i was writing it i talked to someone who had an almost schizophrenic split personality, so one moment their practically his holiness the Dalai Lama and then they flip, and become jealous/violent/angry/ out of control, etc.
this comes in later in the story...
thank you very much, Bee Report Review
u shud probably just continue this. where has jay disappeared off to? aren't u planning to bring him back. puhleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez....Author's Response: oh yes, he'll be back, no fear there, and his oh so very prfect and kissable personae may just start to crack (actually it defetly will, i've already started writing it and its such fun!!!!!)....
there's going to be a nice lot of jealousy, confusion and masses of manipulation coming up in a couple of chapters, so enjoy!!!!!
Thanks, Bee Report Review
I'm just reading this now - I'm going to read up 'til you have posted and then I'll start doing proper reviews... I LOVE it so far though!!! Author's Response: Thankyou, enjoy, Bee Report Review
from here please i love itttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Glad you like it!, thanks for reviewing, you made a very ill feeling womans(thats me by the way) day, or possibly week!!!,
Thanks, Bee xxx Report Review
ooooo yay! "'Dinner' wasn't an euphemism for let's go up to your room and have sex, you know," hehe! i luv that bit! seriously, i love the story. it's brilliant!!! yaayness! lol. update soon!
xxxAuthor's Response: "Well i think a woman needs to make it clear that dinner does not equal sex (possibly unless its dinner at the Ivy with a single Jude Law, then it probably isn't euphemism but just a delay, i mean you want to get your nice dinner first!)" quote, Bee in mad feminist mode!!!! the next chapter is waiting to be validated, keep reading. Thanks, Bee the romantic feminist XXX Report Review
o yay! she broke up wiv him!YEEEESSS! lol. i'm really sorry I hate him so much, but i have a bad feeling bout him. It's a complicated emotion. lol.
update sooooon pleease!!!!
xxxxxxAuthor's Response: the next two chapters are waiting to be updated... glad your pleased i broke them up. but you might be disapointed yet, he's not just going to disapear off the scene!!!
thank you for reviewing (and keep going!!!), it made my day as i'm ill in bed and to infectious to be visited by anyone, i'm having withdrawl symptoms from hugs and kisses!!!!
Bee xxxxx Report Review
yay! im so glad he loves her, and won't let her go! that's so brilliant!!! YAAAAAY!! n i bet ginyn n harry were writing dirty things in that book, ryt? hehe.
write more soon!
xxxxAuthor's Response: ofcouse they weren't, they were writing about school work and international politics(!!), honest....
of course he loves her, i mean she does have pink hair!!!
thanks, Bee Report Review
yaaaay!!! get in there, Remus!! woot woot! lmao. thank u so much!!! YAAAY!!! *virtual luv n hugs 4 bee!!!* lmao. thanks! u brightened up my day!
xxxxAuthor's Response: glad it pleased you.... i loved writing it!!!! Bee Report Review
oo, sexual tension, i luv it!! yaaay! please get e'm 2geva! i'd luv u 4 da rest of mi life! lol.
off to read the next (hopefully slightly sexual lmao) chapter!
xxxxAuthor's Response: don't worry they will.... i mean come on its remus and tonks, they've got to!!!! Bee x Report Review
awww that's so sweet.....more remus/tonks love!!! everyone lvoes it!!! and you write it so well! lol.
xxxxxAuthor's Response: its coming, its coming. be patient!! Bee xxxxx Report Review
no killing Remus, no killing Remus!!! Remus is so incredibly hot, and you so could not do that!!!! lol. reading more now!
xxxAuthor's Response: don't worry i could never bring myself to do it... even my most unoptimistic moods!!!! cheers, Bee xxxx Report Review
awww, well at least they're in the same room, i guess.....better than nothing....
lol. keep 'em comin!
xxxxAuthor's Response: Thankyou, i intend to... Report Review
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