I love The Chapter But.Can You Pleeaasseee Break Down How Her Name Is Pronounced?? dejion (as In Mustard) Keeps Running Through My Head!! :-S
LOVE IT!! I WILL BE REVIEWING THE OTHER CHAPTERS!!

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*claps* What a wonderful story!
I thoroughly enjoyed it!!!
:Dani

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Aww Dillon and Renee are so freaking cute!
:Dani

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So, I've read this book, and i can say that in honestly, not only are you a (pardon the language) a kick @$$ author, but this book is by far my second favorite of what i have read on this sight so far. Off to Read the Sequal

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awsome story! i just love how you have made it so that they were actually reading, that it was actually still just a story.

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hope you wrote a sequel because this was a good story

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cute story

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No chance to say, "Not Slytherin" huh?

Author's Response: No, sorry none

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YECH! DRACO! I HATE HIM!

Author's Response: I don't hate him! He has some flaws true, but I think that's what makes him interesting!

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Whoops! A slip up for Renee. I Love That Name.

Author's Response: Thanks again!

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Darjeeling is tea! LOL! I like so far.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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hey loved the story
the review might seem a lil late
but i forgot earlier
right now im readin the sequel
keep writin
ur really good
rock on

Author's Response: Thanks so much, haven't had ANY time to write lately. School sucks.

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Pansy Parkinson who was sitting next to *millicent bulstrode*?
or is it a oc

Author's Response: yeah, i noticecd that too late, but I didn't want to wait for the line to change one name. Blah

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nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! is there a sequel to this about laurie? i love the ending. im totally all for the dramatic stuff. so this was great! i loved your story. it was great to read it. if you ever need help? im a beta, and i would be honored to help you write your stuff. if you ever wanna give it a chance....you can email me at desdemonathedevil@yahoo.com................ ally

Author's Response: Well thanks! I'm super glad you liked my story that much to offer up your time for me. Of late, I've had a lot of school stuff going on and have had ZERO chance to write, but I'm going to do some rereading soon and hopefully will get to squeeze in some more chapters. Thanks so much! ~ Julie

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aww. so he comes with her!!! yay! you didnt kill him after all!

Author's Response: once again...this time...

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no!!!!!! you horrid horrid person!!!!!!!! that is if you did kill dillon...... please let him live?!?!

Author's Response: =)...THIS time...

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that ba$tard! omg. killed his own wife! i thot asianne just turned him evil. i hate him! i am glad, tho, that renee isnt alone in the maskavitz house.

Author's Response: =)

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damn! laurie is the special one?!? wow. surprise surprise. im still sooo pissed that olivander is bad. go get dillon, renee!

Author's Response: Haha you tell them!

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uh oh. dang. wait. i forgot to mention. i am soooo pissed that olivander is a bad guy! but this chapter was good. im glad and at the same time disappointed that you let the slytherins win against the gryffindors. granted, malfoy was not captain of the said team, so that was cool. i think it was just the fact that gryffindor IS fallible. we're so used to seeing them unbeatable.

Author's Response: Hufflepuff beat them once remember?

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ooh. pansy is such a jerk sometimes. i mean, i love her. but the way authors write about her? i just wanna kick her in the face. oh well. this was another great chapter! i cannot believe that you would be so awful as to make renee twenty one. i'd make her nineteen at the most, just coz im a hopeless romantic. this is getting sooo good.

Author's Response: You'll see why I made her older in the sequel.

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whoo hoo! go dillon!

Author's Response: Heck yeah!

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hahahahaha. i cracked up when they got caught. this was a really funny chapter, especially with the flying. but renee angry WAS pretty frightening.

Author's Response: Well, she can't be perfect right? No one is.

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oooh. please let it be dillon!

Author's Response: =)

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no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gah!!!!!!!!!! i dont want her there!!!!!!!!! oh, fine. youre the writer....its millicent bulstrode, just in case no one else caught that. no offence, but you have quite a few mistakes....

Author's Response: Oh I know, i've been meaning to go back and fix it and I did in later chapters. Dunno what was going through my mind when I wrote that chapter. It was probably really late or something.

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no! not draco! i love him, but i dont want her to fall for draco! besides, its kinda illegal...

Author's Response: Haha, keep reading.

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