So cute!

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awe.
great story
i loved it.

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Beautiful. Absolutely breathtaking. I love the raw emotion in this, especially the part about the hair. You didn't try to soften it at all, and it made this even more heartwrenching. You deserve more reviews than you have.

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That's just lovely. A good discussion of a sensitive topic

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huh...so that kind of teared me up because I had a short experimentation with anorexia. I had been the skinny girl my whole life and when I started gaining weight I freaked out a little. Not to mention the fact that I was just starting highschool and stressed to the maximum with pressures to fit in and I just felt like here's one thing I can do myself. One decision I can make. I now have friends who are struggling with that and it's the worst thing every when everyone knows it when they're at doctor's appts. So sorry if I babbled. Good story even if it was a bit short.

Author's Response: omg, im so sorry that you had to go through that. my best friend was anorexic for awhile so i decided to write this story kinda about her, i guess. im sorry the story was so short. thank you for the review!

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That's a dramatic one shot! Good job. I like how there was a bit off a happy ending.

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