5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Unicorn Girl Becoming Orphans

1st February 2006:
It's kinda confusing to read and there are some grammatical errors...but the story ius good considering that this is ur first fic. Keep up improving ur writing skills.

Author's Response: Sorry about it being so confusing. And i am sorry about the grammer. And if i spell some thing wrong rong most likly it is because i am only 11. Thanks for the review and pointing out my mistakes! :-)

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Review #2, by Hermiones_alter_ego Becoming Orphans

22nd January 2006:
great stuff! just a hint tho... if u make a space in between each line it looks longer*hint hint**nudge nudge* LOL i like the last bit best i think very powerful. okies byebye xoxo

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. i like the last bit to! Any way thanks for the review and for the hint. I will definatly take some of your advice. I will also try and update soon. I just need to do the spell check. And it will be up. :-) Once again thanks Hermiones_alter_ego!

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Review #3, by _Harry_Potter_ Becoming Orphans

19th January 2006:
I think it was rushed. You did too much in a short space. You also need to space out your writing. Look at my chapters, I space mine out. Other than that, it sounds a good story.

Author's Response: Sorry, And thank you for being honest. I do agree, I should space it out a bit more. I will try and fix it. This is my first fan fiction on any site so I am not the best writer yet. And thanks again for your review it really helps.

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Review #4, by Prince of Persia Becoming Orphans

6th January 2006:
It begins good, but i don't think, that J.K.R. would kill the whole Weasley family, maybe one-two people.

Author's Response: I don't think so ether but they are to much help to harry. thanks for you'r review! =)

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Review #5, by Hermione_Crookshanks Becoming Orphans

6th January 2006:
Really good so far. Keep it up! Glad to see that you contributing to hpff - and it's a great contribution at that. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviwing I am so happy you reviwed I really like your storys. I will most likley update the 6th but I have a Tae kwon do test!! going for Brown belt so that will keep me busy!! thanks again for you reviewind!!!! :-)

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