Great story!!
Are you going to write a sequel?

Author's Response: i actually wasn't thinking about writing a sequel...i might, though...if u have any ideas for one, lemme know! lol

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I WANT TO NO I WANT TO NO!

LupinFan45 10/10

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Oh, it's so sweet! This last chapter gets THE MOST rare award of all, the Heartship award! Out of 100 stories, 1 would get this award. Good job!

♣♦-Heartship-♣♦

Author's Response: o thank you!!!!

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Greagescent chapter. You should write a sequel.

Author's Response: i might write a sequel...don't know wat it would be about though lol

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Oh, the pain that caplocks me!

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Good job, these girls know some good ettiquete.

Author's Response: thanx

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Lovely, high metabolism is good for the bones. Potassium is good, too. Anyway, shall I compare it to a summer's day?

Author's Response: hehe thanx

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Good job, again. I think it is good, but I personnaly would have the chapters a bit longer. Grinna.

Author's Response: ya, the chapters do get longer

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"I have my ways." Good job, Starfire. Chapter two is good, but why are all your characters named Starfire? Any particular reason? 10/10.

Author's Response: starfire's just a character i came up with...idk....i just love the name

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Wow, that sounds like a FF I'm writing!

Good, it wins the Creative award!

♣♦-Creative-♣♦

Author's Response: really? kool! thanx!

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so Sirius is alive??!!!???
yay!!!
daddy!!

Author's Response: hehe yep he is

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what will happen next...?

Author's Response: hehe

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its getting good...


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i again like it lots, xoxo

Author's Response: glad you like it! miss u! xoxo

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max thinks its "monsterific"

i think its really good, even though i have reviewed it before i think :)

miss u, xoxo, mag

Author's Response: glad he thinks it's "monsterific"! lol...glad you like it mag! luv u! MWAH! xoxo

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Um, It's Lily and, I think it's really good, But some of the sentences are really choppy and It would be better if there was like a space between them, it would be more easy to read.

Good start,

Author's Response: Thanks so much! and i know it's spelled Lily, but I prefer the "double l" spelling...I don't know why! lol!

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OMG!!!! I LUV IT!!! ONE OF THE BESTEST STORIES EVER!!! YAY U!!!!!! IT WAS THE BEST!!!!!! *claps loudly* Ur one of my new friends! YAY U! YAY ME!! YAY EVERYTHING!!!!! 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10

Author's Response: thank you so much!!!!! you are one of my new friends too!!!

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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i need to know!!!!!!!!!!! o...o..o...! is james and lilly going to live??? or maybe.. is serius going to stay alive and they still die???? I need to know! please tell me!!!!!! anyway! miss u sooo much!!! o yeah who is the person who reviewed right before this?? a friend from new mexico??? just curios! lol! ttyl! MWAH!

Author's Response: ill have the last chappie up soon!!!!!!! miss u too!!!!! MWAH! luv u kita!!!!!!! ttyl!

-Starfire


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OMG! U gotta write more ASAP! I need to read this! It's not even funny! Okay maybe it is but pleaz! I totally need to see what's gonna happen!

Author's Response: the next chappie will be up soon! just have to submit it, and then we wait! I'll try to hurry! Glad u love this story so much!


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Weeeee aarrrreee hhhheeerrree . . . maybe writer's block is a big hint, Star . . . but that's just prejudice. See me, being prejudiced against the site? Silly me. Piretty banner-type-thingy.
Okay, I'm reading these stories, aren't you happy? *taps foot* I'm waiting for my hug now . . .

Author's Response: i'm over the writer's block now, kit! finished the story!!! next chapter will be up soon!!!! and here's ur hug! *hugs Kit* lol....thanx for reading!

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Really koool!

Author's Response: thanx!!!

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Luv it wen r u gona finish it its good

Author's Response: last chapter should be up soon! thanx!!!!

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So koool!

Author's Response: thanx!

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OMG!!!! dumbleodre was all serious (no pun) and then he said she was rasied by obi-one-kanobi and i just CRACKED UP!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! it was so unexpected too! its great!

Author's Response: thanx! im glad you like it!!!!!!

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YES!!!!!!!! that is sooo cool! awsome place to leave off! we make one awsome team dont we! lol!!!! ugh i cant wait to find out what star is gonna do!!!!!! lol! i still think petigrew should have died... but oh well! lol! ttyl! MWAH!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: yeah, we do! who knows, pettigrew may still die.....who knows, besides me! lolol.....ttyl...MWAH...miss u! -Star

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