Wow!!! It's very interesting. Update soon please. Report Review
i'm so glad that you have my kind of Draco in mind just promise you won't have him turning sappy or anything alright Report Review
This was pretty good, definitely has potential... A few things I'd like to say is watch out for things like spelling, punctuation, and capitalization. It gets frustrating at times to read a fic with periods and commas missing or misspelled words that need to be figured out. Also, be careful not to make the characters too OOC... No complaints about Draco or Ginny, really, but Ron is sounding a bit too much like a jerk to me. It was still pretty good, however, and you should write more! Report Review
your stoyr is so cute, i love it. please update son Report Review
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