cool but a bit too short even 4 a one shot
i love readin your stories and ive read them all apart from about 2 i think!
=D

Author's Response: lol thanx!

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i don't like to reveiw but i will! these are my standereds! #1 i need either something funny or romance! thats it! you got it so i put it as a 7 on the old scale down there!

Author's Response: that thanx mucho, mostly my standards as well, as you can tell by 3/4 of my writing

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ok, constructive criticism: i think there was only one thing that happened in this entire story. ok, 2. 1: they woke up, 2: he told her. I think if you went through someone's thoughts about why he was going to tell her, or why it seems he was fighting with himself to tell her, or what he feels about her, or what went on through her head while he was saying all this, etc. it needs a little bit of work

Author's Response: u k wat? because of yur actually nice and actually constructive review, im rewriting this entire story from scratch. Thank you for a review that was finaly constuctive critisim that didnt sound like u hated my guts and the story.

That might have have come of sounding really sarcastic, but it wasnt. u should see the new version soon.

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Ok...it was good but just a tiny bit boring. And 'I like you'? If Harry said that to Hermione she wouldn't kiss him right?

Author's Response: WEll, hermione's weird. I dunno.

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Very good. I like Gilmore Girls and that epi was very sad.

Author's Response: Thanx. yeah it was...

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basic

Author's Response: So what?

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Whoa, that happened fast! But good, nevertheless.

Author's Response: Thanx!

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yay! go r/h! go gilmopre girls! go head banging!

Author's Response: lol, thanx!

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short but cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!! is there more?

Author's Response: Thanx! Sorry, no. :{

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