Aww that is so sweet! It's heartbreaking as well. Wonderfully written :) Report Review
As I sat here shoving jellybeans into my mouth faster than I can chew them, I discovered the perfect bit of romantic fluff to satisfy some other craving in me I couldn't identify. So thank you, first of all, for some peace of mind. Secondly, I will say I don't like Harry/Hermione. Usually. But in this case I couldn't help it. It was so well written and everything just seemed to fit and make sense. I can't argue against that. : ) I love the nice little details you've included...the wet feet, the little boy with the mistletoe, the last year's sweater, the "needing a drink"...it all just combines to create a very real, alive, vibrant picture. The only thing I didn't like was Hermione's giggling. It doesn't seem like her, though I can't seem to think of any reason why not at the moment. It's not like you said Snape was prancing in a sunlit field hugging a teddy bear, it just doesn't seem to fit. All in all, though, masterfully done. Thank you for writing this.Author's Response: Thank you so much. I take a little pride in the every person that tells me that I make Harry/Hermione a little more bearable for them. It's part of my mission to convert all to Harmony :) As for the giggling... what can I say? Sometimes girls giggle :) Thank you so much for a brilliant review :) Report Review
That was so sweet!! Very tender & heartfelt.Author's Response: Thank you!!! :) I try really hard to convey real emotion. You're a dear for reading. Report Review
awww....Author's Response: *sigh* Report Review
Oh, that was so sweet! I loved it! Go Harmony!Author's Response: YAY Harmony!!! :) Thank you :) Report Review
Aaaaw... I almost cried. Whoa, Harry was old! But then again, I suspect people become older in the wizarding world (Dumbledore was about 150!). Nice fic.Author's Response: Thank you for reading!!! Tears are a lovely compliment :) Report Review
That was so beautiful. I loved it.Author's Response: Thanks dear :) I'm glad you read :) Report Review
I think this is anothe good piece of fan fiction, I liked it. Having read some of your stories I have got the impression that you're trying to bring a message across. I think your Romance, non-happy-ending stories are special in a way as they sometimes make me smile although the story is actually quite sad. Author's Response: I do indeed try to provide a small message in each of these bittersweet stories... I think that happiness can be found, even in despair... and thus this story was born. There is joy in long life, joy in love, and especially joy in memory. I appreciate your kindness... it means so much to me. Report Review
This is such a beautiful story. I love how much emotion you put in here. It was happy and all, but at the same time there was something despondent there. Good Job!Author's Response: Claire -- I thank you so much :) I'm so glad you felt the emotion... it makes me happy to know that the story was told straight to the heart :) thank you again :) Report Review
Before I start, I'll just warn you now, that I'm not a fan of H/Hr fanfics, so I may not like this as I have liked others. Even though it was H/Hr, I did enjoy reading it, as it was written extremely well. Very fluffy and very cute. I can't really think of muh wrong with it, except that the title may be a bit common. I typed it in Search, just to make sure and it said that there were more than 50 fanfics with the title "Memories". I suggest that you just ponder some alternative titles. Other than that, great work!Author's Response: I appreciate your disclaimer... And maybe just to let you know, I think you've read everything of mine that's NOT H/Hr :) I feel that the title is pretty common too.... I just couldn't think of anything else!! If you come up with something, let me know :) I'm glad you liked it, despite the ship choice :) Your reviews always make me smile! Report Review
Even though it was H/Hr, I did enjoy reading it, as it was written extremely well. Very fluffy and very cute.
I can't really think of muh wrong with it, except that the title may be a bit common. I typed it in Search, just to make sure and it said that there were more than 50 fanfics with the title "Memories". I suggest that you just ponder some alternative titles. Other than that, great work!Author's Response: I appreciate your disclaimer... And maybe just to let you know, I think you've read everything of mine that's NOT H/Hr :) I feel that the title is pretty common too.... I just couldn't think of anything else!! If you come up with something, let me know :) I'm glad you liked it, despite the ship choice :) Your reviews always make me smile! Report Review
That is soo sweet I am crying as I write this.*tear*Author's Response: Thank you Paige! You're a doll! Report Review
that was a very sweet story.Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Ah... that was so sweet Jax. It was very well written like everything you write and I really liked the story. It's nice to read a very well written H/Hr story and this one was so beautiful. I liked that you made them old and not young still, there's not many stories where they are 136. Great job, megsAuthor's Response: Megs! I'm glad that you liked it! Well written H/Hr is the stuff of dreams, isn't it? Thank you for reading, darling! Report Review
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