Oh my gosh I actually think I love malfoy!!! I feel so bad for him, hes so messed up but its not his fault lol.. YOu are a true master of words!!!! LOVE IT UPDATE

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Waow I actually feel really bad for malfoy!!!! How did u do that? I love this story, some really good writing and ideas here. I loVED this chapter. The wholeself harming thing is creepy tho lol awesome stuff

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How wacked up this story is, I'm going to like it even if you're spelling is like a mainyac. keep writing

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'm really impressed by this. Good way to go with the different character journals/diaries/povs. The subeject is handled well too, it doesn't feel forced or neglected. The emotions seem real and all. I REALLY hope this will be updated!

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i really loved that! it was so cool! hmm somehow you kept them in character...nice! very nice!

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That was seriously dark and depressing, but I liked it b/c Hermione and Harry are in love with each other and are to scared to tell each other. *Sigh* I'm such a romantic ;) You also wrote with a lot of emotion, that was good.

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I agree... ADD MORE!!!!! Seriously.

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ADD MORE ADD MORE ADD MORE

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I like how the story is shaping up with the different POV\'s. I can\'t wait for your next update. Do try for a little better spelling and punctuation though, would you? It makes for a much better read.

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this was so sad and amazing and oh my god it made me cry!

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I LOVE this story!!!!!! It really captures human emotions and how people deal with them. It\'s so emotional and depressing, but it brings in things people have to deal with in real life, and who normal people react to them. Please, please, please continue.

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Hi, Your story is great and I just love it. Please continu. I\'m longing to know what happens and if Harry and Herm confess their feelings. Please CONTINUE THIS LOVELY STORY ALICIA

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very good! very emothional, but very well-written! keep writing!

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Like the others those chapters were really good! I know this isnt suppose to be funny....but i couldnt help laughing when I saw the \"The – Boy – Who – Was – Severely – Screwed – Up” Anyways keep it up! Harry likes Hermione! Yippee! I was always a Harry/Hermione shipper

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WRITE MORE!!!!!

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this is great. you seem very wisw beyond your years and thats what makes you an excelent writer please continue the story, yours, Yami

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That was deep. Very emotional. Could you make Harry and Draco friends? THey need each other...please update soon that was really good

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This is good...I hope you continue it soon~

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I like that idea

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omg, this story is amazing!!!!!!! its so emotional, I dont no how you can put it all into words. I can really picture the characters being exactly like this, too, and the way that you\'ve been writing it makes it so hard to just stop erading or to wait for the next chapter to come out! *coughcoghHINTHINTcoughcoughKEEPTHECHAPTERSCOMINGcoughcough* lol. I really like how you are switching the charaters POV for each chapter, it really lets you know what all the characters are thinking and how they are feeling instead of just one or two characters, changing the POV\'s was such a great idea!!! And I honestly cant think of any critisism for this story! There\'s almost no spelling or grammar mistakes, its beautifully written, and it really draws in the reader\'s attention. You can tell by reading this that you\'ve put alot of thought into your story!!! you\'re really talented, I\'d say right up ther with JK Rowling and JRR Tolkien!!!!!!! I cant wait to see more of this story, keep writing or I will be forced to set my evil monkey minions and my army of pink furry duckies on you!!!!!lol lots of fuzzies and hugglez ~frodorulezzzzzzzzzzzz~

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