Cute and humorous

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Cute and humorous

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Its cute and funny.

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Very funny. So cute! Fluffy, but all the same, cute. What's with the capitals?

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Sweet, fluffy goodness.

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I thought it WAS funny. And of course as with all humorous stories, I have to make a list :]:].

1. This was a little trickier. Did she even like love heart or scented paper? He’d have to ask her. But how could he drop that into casual conversation? He could see it now;

“Yeah, Quidditch was great, shame about us losing. By any chance do you happen to like decorated paper smelling of roses?”,

2.Dean looked from Ron’s crimson cheeks and wide eyes to his ruffled bed sheets, and a grin appeared on his face.

“Oh, right, I get what you were doing,” he said raising his eyebrows up and down, “but you know, you could have just used the shower instead of locking the door,”

“What? What’s the shower got to do with anything?” He looked at Dean’s wide eyes which seemed to convey a message to him. “What no, I wasn’t doing…that!”

“It’s alright Ron, perfectly normal,” said Dean who picked up his Transfiguration book, winked at Ron then headed down the stairs.

3.“Wait - she likes me back?” His heart was thundering in his chest, was Harry really saying what he thought he was?

Harry frowned, “Yeah, is that a problem or something?”

“Are you kidding? That’s great! Great!”

4. And there must have been another one, but I seemed to have misplaced it.

Wonderful job :]:]. And don't worry, I can't help myself from writing cliched stories either. 10/10 again!

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i liked it! it wa very cute. it wasnt humorus in the laugh out loud kind of way, it was more humorus in the "ron's actually studying a book" kind of way...i'm not sure if other people liked this story, but i really did 7/10
-aly

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Good!
Fantastic!

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Hehe. I liked it. It was cute :D

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That wasn't incredibly pointless. And it was well written!?!
SO cute?!

Author's Response: Aw thank you.
When i write stories like that one i always wonder if anybody will actually like it as it doesn't seem serious enough.

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LOVED IT

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I really liked it! If only someone really made a book like that!

Author's Response: Lol, that would be good.

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This is excellent! There were no spelling or grammar errors to speak of, so thanks for that. You have no idea how annoying it is to have some illiterate person writing a fanfiction that probably would have turned out well, had it not been for the mistakes. This isn't cliched in the slightest and its done well and thoroughly. You really covered all the bases! I'm adding it to my favorites. Well done! The spiffeh Ellie

Author's Response: Wow, thanks!!
Lol, I know it can get annoying, my grammar isn't my strongest point (lol) but if a story has really bad spelling and grammar, i usually just stop reading it!

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The spelling/punctation stuff is good considering you didn't sleep the night before when you wrote this. The passages from the 'How to Write a Love Letter' is funny. Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks, I wasn't sure how it's look as I was tired!

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Don't worry. I write like that too. Your story was great and those are also great tips on love letters. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Lol thanks I just made them up as I went along!

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This is how short, funny stories should be done. I have no trouble visualizing Ron doing this. Hermione is good too. It is also nice not tripping over misspellings that ruin the flow of otherwise good stories.

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That's all I wanted the story to be!

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how do you pronounce cliche?

Author's Response: CL-EE-SHAY

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it was lovely trulywonderful. Dawnlee

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it, I got the (slightly bad) idea from a Google search lol!

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great story!!!

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That was sooooo cute and funny!!! OMG!!! Hahahaha, I loved Dean “Oh, right, I get what you were doing,” he said raising his eyebrows up and down, “but you know, you could have just used the shower instead of locking the door,” HAHAHAH!!! It doesn't matter if it was cliche or not, it was really well written and I totally enjoyed it. OH! and I loved the last line. "She had tasted like chocolate, Ron thought later, holding her soft hand in his." *sigh* That had to have been my favorite part.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Lol the Dean part was probably my favourite bit!

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very good I liked it alot not bad formatting at all

Author's Response: thanks, I'm really not very good at formatting!

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Aawww! It's so sweet. And, I love cliche'.

Author's Response: Lol I don't like to admit it, but i do too lol!

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Lovely!~~Emma~~

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