I've read a few on this site, and this is the only one that seemed really sincere. I loved the pace, where she thought what, and how everything was explained - only thing I noticed was I don't understand how blood can trickle down Jame's face or how she can see an expression of determination on him when he was said to be face down.
It's a small detail, and it didn't effect my admiration for this writing at all. Splendid work. Report Review
Why have you quit? I loved it! Report Review
That was heart wrenching....
very good! Report Review
well i never have read a story like that before but i loved it it was so tuching i would like to know when it is compleated because it is the kind of fic i like to read full of emotion nd such especually when McGonagall is involved as you can see from my name McGonagall is one of my fav characters so please finish this and let me know when it is finished and keep up the good writing Report Review
AAAAAAAWWWWWW that ws so cut. i luv it!
This was very powerful. Two things though: the word "charred" wasn't spelled correctly (but that's the only minor thing, lol). Also, how could Harry be huddled in a corner? Babies can't really huddle, if you think about it. But all in all, it was a very good story. =) Report Review
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