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Review #1, by Julia Padilly

7th July 2011:

I've read a few on this site, and this is the only one that seemed really sincere. I loved the pace, where she thought what, and how everything was explained - only thing I noticed was I don't understand how blood can trickle down Jame's face or how she can see an expression of determination on him when he was said to be face down.
It's a small detail, and it didn't effect my admiration for this writing at all. Splendid work.

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Review #2, by Potter 'n Mione

The only One

1st April 2007:

Why have you quit? I loved it!

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Review #3, by Pheobs61

The only One

16th May 2006:

That was heart wrenching....
very good!

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Review #4, by BMcGonagall

The only One

11th January 2006:

well i never have read a story like that before but i loved it it was so tuching i would like to know when it is compleated because it is the kind of fic i like to read full of emotion nd such especually when McGonagall is involved as you can see from my name McGonagall is one of my fav characters so please finish this and let me know when it is finished and keep up the good writing

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Review #5, by ckitten

The only One

26th January 2005:

AAAAAAAWWWWWW that ws so cut. i luv it!

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Review #6, by frenchornplaya

The only One

28th March 2004:

This was very powerful. Two things though: the word "charred" wasn't spelled correctly (but that's the only minor thing, lol). Also, how could Harry be huddled in a corner? Babies can't really huddle, if you think about it. But all in all, it was a very good story. =)

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