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Review #1, by Ronsmyfave1 Warming up

26th February 2006:
Can`t remember if Iv`e reviewed but what the hey? This is just great this story, I loved it, I`m awfully jealous of Hermoine at the moment but oh well, nah really it was excellent, I so can`t wait for the next chapter, I`m also looking for someone to review a story of mine if you could somehow let me know if you could that would be good thanks.

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Review #2, by Ronsmyfave1 Old Magic

24th February 2006:
Wow I love your story, it was really good I hope you update more on this soon.

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Review #3, by raven_dove2007 Old Magic

16th January 2006:
very nice way to get people to reveiw. i like that. i love he fred/hermione pairing it's one of my personal favs. and i really don't like cliffhangers, they're no fun. well for you they are, but not for the rest of us. i like the idea of the "auto howler" very creative

Author's Response: thank you! I will attempt to curb my cliff-hanger enthusiasm :)

Author's Response: thank you! I will attempt to curb my cliff-hanger enthusiasm :)

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Review #4, by mrsronweasley Old Magic

14th January 2006:
I must say this story was very confusing. You kept going from one place to another and I wasn't sure if Fred was looking back at the things that had just happened or you were just speeding through it all. Thats the only really big thing I saw. If you want it to be like memories or thoguhts of something that had just happened or farther into the past you should italicize the words. Other than that it was excellently written. I have to say the whole Hermione and Fred romance was definitely a surprise. I've never read a stroy like that before. It was very unique thoguh. I also think you should probably put a real ending to your story, cliffhangers are really only meant for chaptered fics. I really liked the way you used detail in your story. I'm really big on detailed sotries and you've got what I'm always looking for in a person's writing. It was really good. Excellent job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll definitely look at working on the confusing aspects of the story, I never thought of using a device like italicizing. Thanks again <3

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Review #5, by Manda509 Old Magic

9th January 2006:
Pretty Good Story, Can't wait for the next chapter....

Author's Response: thank you:) I'm working on the next one now

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Review #6, by mudbloodgirl123 Old Magic

8th January 2006:
now why would you assume that? ^_^ anyway great start but POSIONS IT HAD TO BE POSIONS!!!!! lol till next time :-)

Author's Response: I don't wish to gush but..... thank you thank you thank you for reviewing! And isn't it always potions? :)

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