Whoa Drama alert! Don't take that as an insult, I'm all for the tragic love story! Please update soon! = P

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ok, love the chapter, tho its the same ,but in draco's point of view. update soon. love it.

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oooo.. love the endinf tho. its good and cant wait for more. more more more..lol

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You are a really good writer, the story was brilliant, but i love ron and dont like seeing him portrayed a such an evil <<tag not allowed="red">tag not allowed="red">censored. Oh well, it was a great story plz write more

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Awesome! Bad Ron! *chokes Ron* Lets just say, I don't like him much. Go Draco!! Yay!! I loved the kiss it was so... wow.

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Is this all there is? It was really good, but I want more

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Great great write more

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This is really go and we both think that you should continue with this story it is very good!

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oh yea, and i love the name!

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cute! loved it! great beginning...i hope you update soon!

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Well, it's rushed. But you've got a great writing style. Honestly, I can see at least three chapters out of this one. Like maybe explain how Hermione and Draco became at best, civil adversaries. And in that same chapter give an example of Ron and Hermione's relationship, where you could put the part about her loving him, but he's been silent about it. Then instead of her rushing to Draco's arms, you could set up something that almost happens. These are just suggestions, because I feel you have the potential to work this idea out to be something wonderful. You definitely have the talent. Oh and just another suggestion. j.k. rowling has hermione as a sweet know-it-all, and Malfoy, an arrogant, but cowardly S.O.B. don't forget that. I hope you take this comment and use it good. That's all i wanted to do was help. Keep in touch. I know i'll keep checking back.

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