I loved your story. Although I am a canon shipper and I love the pairings in the book, I found this extremely entertaining and it kept me up all night reading. This made me look at Harry/Hermione in a new light :D.
I think I'm inspired. I want to experiment a one shot with this couple :DAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you so much! That's really kind of you to say. Good luck with your one shot!! Report Review
I love this story, I always wanted harry and herminoe to get together! Its really well written. I love how it all worked out, although it was quite predictable what was going to happen at the ball!
I love fanfictions, and this is one of my favourites, although you didnt have a lot of time to write it!
Thank you very much!Author's Response: Thank you so much! And LOL, yes, this was a very predictable story (tends to happen when a 14 year old is the author ;-D), but I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless! Report Review
"And you know, killing every girl that comes within a 10-mile radius of Harry."
Splendid!!! Gosh, she's so late!Author's Response: Thank you! =D Report Review
AW! Poor Harry, it must be absolutely impossible to win Hermione's heart. I say, OUT WITH IT! Confess your love already! But I know there's a probability that that won't happen any time soon... That climax will have to take longer to pop up, right?
Anyway, very hilarious, but very frustrating at the same time! WHY CAN'T SHE SEE???Author's Response: Thanks so much! And LOL, yes, I'm afraid you have quite a it to go. I'm a little evil. Report Review
Harry's so adorable :D How can Hermione not see? Then again, when she doesn't want to believe something, she can be pretty persistent with convincing herself of anything otherwise right?
I am really loving the transitions between diary entry to the story at hand!
Lovely job with this chapter~!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Oooh! I like Ginny :D
"Now, I must go to the library. I have someone I need to…meet up with.” Ginny waggled her eyebrows at me."
So typically Ginny (Five thumbs up!)
Really, really amusing conversation between Hermione and Ginny. I like that it sounds like Hermione's going crazier and crazier with each entry!!!
SpreaddapooAuthor's Response: LOL, thank you, I'm glad! Ginny was my favorite to write. =) Report Review
VERY hilarious! I don't really think that this is how Hermione's stream of thoughts would go about, but, what the heck? It's called AU for a reason, right?
Very quirky and ... nice for a change. I'm always reading so many serious, dramatic books that these little humour-filled chapters do so much!
Well done!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
This was a delightful story. I thoroughly enjoyed every second of it. :) Ten points to you, my friend.Author's Response: Thank you!! Report Review
Personally, I happen to prefer when the girl is younger than the boy in the relationship, so I appreciate that particular change. It just seems more acceptable that way. And I'm a big fan of AU stories, personally. It gives you a bit more leeway in your writing, doesn't it? You can add your own personal twist to the characters' personalities, so that they conform with the story you're creating. Incredibly liberating.
Somewhat related to that topic, I really like the Hermione you portray. She's still as school-obsessed and bossy as ever, but the sarcasm and humor shows the side of her that Harry was alluding to. Harry's perverseness is... well, it's a tiny bit much. However, I'm sure that your reason for this will be made clear in later chapters. Therefore, on to the next!Author's Response: I think I was no older than 14 when I wrote this story, and looking back I honestly have NO idea what I was thinking with regards to Harry's characterization. I THINK I can safely blame it on these ridiculous "Bedtime Stories" my friend and I co-wrote for harryandhermione [dot] org, which were pretty much Harry Potter fics on crack (so much fun, but definitely crack). There's definitely a lot I would change about this fic if I had the chance, but I guess now it's too late, isn't it? LOL. I suggest reading "The List" for a similar Hermione (and story actually) but a better (if not still slight OOC but at least BELIEVABLE OCC) Harry. A;though I should warn you that Hermione IS older than Harry in that fic (but it doesn't come up much, so you can go ahead and pretend she's younger ^_-).
Thanks for reviewing! :-) Report Review
Aw!I still love this story!!! Great job, the writing is fantastic!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Report Review
Good!!! I hope they soon tie up...Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
nice story... i m gonna read further...Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy. :-) Report Review
This is the second time I read this story (i read it another time under another name, way back when, probably around 2008) and I still love it just as much as I did then. Your writing is excellent and the story is wicked good. Despite having read it before, I didn't remember the ending and your surprising twist with Ginny was wonderful. That's exactly what I imagined Ginny to be like in a harry-hermione centered story. For the second time in the past few years, GOOD JOB! Obvious 10 / 10.Author's Response: Aw, thank you! That's so wonderful to read. Report Review
You left out if this Eric was a Weasley, And if there was another friend involved? Like say there was the Marauders then the Golden Trio...whats next?Author's Response: LOL. He's not a Weasley. I would've mentioned it if he were! Despite how it might feel while reading the books, every character doesn't need to end up with a Weasley. ^_- All you needed to know was provided in this chapter. I had no intention of setting up another trio ... there might have been another friend, but the whole point was that history was repeating itself. =) Report Review
great job. keep it up.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
i love this story, i just wish you would post all your stories on wattpad. it makes them easier to read.Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I've never received complaints about readability BFEORE wattpad became popular, so I'm going to refrain from doing so. Hope you don't mind!! :-) Report Review
wow i loved your story it was great, you are awsome at this!
i love how you used all the humour in this fanfic it always had me laughing my head off!Author's Response: Thank you!! :-D Report Review
Oh wow! I love you. I love this story. Well, I've only read the first chapter, but it's the first chapter that I've read in ages without getting bored, and that is why I /aime/ it so much. Thank you for bringing this story into my life. 10/10!Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's really kind of you. I hope you enjoy the rest! Report Review
I love the way that they got together. I can also imagine the "talk" by the fireplace. Good job on the description and the detail.
Nicely written all in allAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I\\\'m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking your time to review throughout your readings. :-) Report Review
Hermione is so stupid in this chapter! I don't want to insult the author cause that really is something she would do but how could she hate the makeover !! UH!Author's Response: LOL. It's because all that make up simply isn't Hermione. I was sort of taking a jab at all of the authors who make Hermione suddenly peppy and beautiful with straight hair and lots of make up. Heh.
Thanks for reviewing! :-) Report Review
What charming children. And both girls? As if Harry would be so accepting of some guy even befriending his daughters. He would be at Hogwarts everyday tracing their footsteps cursing every guy who went near them.
Great story though. Loved every minute of it. Can't wait to see some of your new stuff. I'll be waiting.
Come on write some more. Need my fix.Author's Response: Yep, both girls. And I think Harry would eventually get used to it...with help/pushing from his wife. LOL.
Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it. :-) Report Review
About time. You are so good at dancing around getting them together for ages. Always make for more interesting reading than where they get together after half a chapter and get all these amazing powers together.Author's Response: Hee, thank you. Dancing around is always fun. It's a guilty pleasure of mine. I always get bored with the stories where their eyes meet during the first line and suddenly they're all over each other...the fun is getting them together!! LOL. Thanks so much for reviewing!! :-) Report Review
HA I knew it. Ginny is one smart cookie. And speaking of Ginny's here's a cookie for you for another awesome chapter.Author's Response: Aw, thank you! *Takes cookie and eats happily* :-) Report Review
Hermione is officially crazy, talking to herself. Love the foot line. Off to next chapter.Author's Response: Oh, Hermione...she had to snap one day. Poor thing.
Thanks for reviewing! :-) Report Review
Mmmm Chocolate. So seriously what is Ginny up to? Idon't like not knowing. Hang on I can just go read the next chapter. Ok I'm leaving now.Author's Response: Chocolate = everything that is good in this world. And you'll just have to read and see...Ginny's quite a manipulative young woman. *Evil smile* Enjoy the rest!! :-) Report Review
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