Hi I love your story and I love your banners can you make me one, it's fine if you don't want to thought I would really apreciate it if you did you banners are awesome!!! Report Review
you are a diamond in the rough amongst the plethora of stories that lack the substance and drive that this one expresses. excellent fic, keep up the good work! Report Review
love it! really good, one part that i saw that i thought was weird, actually weird isnt to describe it.. i dunno, ok so its says, when james was thinking that: he knew as soon as ihs eyes fell on her, that she was the one
but doesnt that mean, that James's love for Lily was completly physical? personnaly, I dont believe in "love at first site" b/c u cant know someone enough to love them by just seeing them, only physically b/c u "love" the way they look Report Review
Awesome story. -hands you virtual trophey- Report Review
No, this definitely didn't miss anything. You did a great job with this story and though it was your first Marauder fic, it sure didn't seem so. You've written it incredibly well and I admire it, the story, as well as your writing. The Lily/James part was amusing, as well as Sirius part (and I liked how you wrote the part when he realised why James liked her), while Remus and Severus parts were a bit angsty. And how the three of them realised that she never could be theirs and how they struggled to keep it hidden (mostly Remus then I guess). Anyway, great piece of work.
R. Stephanie Report Review
Wow. This was a really good one shot. It was very well written, and I liked it alot. Keep writing. And your banners are beautiful. What paint program do you use?Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review! ^_^ And thanks for that too :P. So many thank yous. I use Photoshop 7 though haha ^_^. Report Review
That was flipping awesome! Absolutely splendiferous! That was so well written, and I think you responded to the challenge and rose to the occasion magnificently. Bloody amazing, Andegora, you've done it again. Author's Response: And you read another one! O_O JouR too sweet, thanks so much. I was nervous about this one since the Mauraders never have been my forte :P. xoxoz for you! Report Review
Aw its a sweet little story well done! Im jealous of your talent for writing and banners! oh btw I got your user name off secret lily and i thort since you can do banners you can do storys also and ya can i like ur name btw. Oh in secret lilys banner you made for her. who is the guy? I think hes completely gorgeous!!! And really wanna no who he is! Gr8 Story
Katie xoox Reply?Author's Response: Sorry! I don't think I remember who you mean O__O? The guy, I mean. But thanks very much for the review Report Review
awww thats really good =] very sweet and sad.
i posted on RPP too, btw. Report Review
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