It's great! I love the scenes with the twins, you potray them so well! As for ideas, I think that you should write a scene about Jade seeing Hogwarts again. And maybe after the welcoming feast, you could do something with seeing everyone in her dorm room, and trying to remember them. Maybe you could add a conflict between Cedric and Oliver, like Jade becomes attracted to Oliver or something... Just a thought. :) Keep up the fantastic work, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Report Review
i like it its like the story "defintely not in kansas anymore" but the author deleted it. anyways i like the idea and what are you going to do with her? Report Review
;o I am like SO confused. Totally continue like. And FRED. or GEORGE. Should be her love buddiness. xD You mentioned making me a banner for my story, Hallucinations... *hint* ;oAuthor's Response: I've made it for you! Just email me at firstname.lastname@example.org, and i'll send it over to you! Report Review
I say Fred
It was really good.
Do post a new chapter soon.Author's Response: AHH! You're my first and only reviewer...haha, of course if you are the first, you're obviously my only reviewer...
oh well, thank you sooo much for reviewing! Report Review
Im confused... Whats happening? Plz write more so i can understand! (dont worry, im easily confused tho) Report Review
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