Nice start you spelt somethings wrong but it is really good One question Snape is supposed to be mean why isn't he mean to Hermione ike he is in the books.

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This is a very short start, but it looks interesting. I don't Snape would react quite so kindly about Hermione sending him a letter, but ah well. But I see that it ends here, it was abandoned. It's a shame as we don't even get to see any of the main plot at all. The grammar could be better. I wish you had continued, as then I'd have got more of an idea of what the story would have been about.

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It's very short, but still interesting. I like the way you have made Hermione so swotty that she has asked for extra homework. It's very like her character. Well done : )

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OK a good start.....when are you going to add more......Hope it is soon..... You have a good start at some thing that could be a great story.... hope to see an up date soon.....

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Ok where\'s the Gin/Harry action? more please!

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Good Start! Please do continue. I havent developed an opinion about it yet, because it is only one chapter so far. I am hoping you continue! I want to see where this is going! ~Snakegurl~

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hi this story sounds like its going to be great once you are keep writing PLEASE!!!

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COME ON I HAVE TOKNOW WHATS GOING ON!!!! PLEASE READ MY NEW ONE ASK RON AND HERMIONE!!!

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write, write, write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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