hello darling
love this story. have just reread it after like 2 years. am v much in love with it again, so please do me a huge favour and update again. i swear i don't care how badly written it is. also, i read some of your other stories, they are fabulous. i wish to propose a deal: if you read and review my stories (there are only three and they're all only 1 chapter at the moment) and update, I will read all of your stories and review every chapter. good deal?
love ya
xoxo

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I've enjoyed reading this story so far =)
Hope you update soon!

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Nice chapter, short, but sweet :)
*added to favorites*

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Lol, I like this start ^_^
Yay for the 1%! :D
10/10 for the chapter

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Hmmm... Again, a great chapter. Just needs to be longer :P

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Aaaww, again it's too short. Well, a short chapter needs a short review. :P

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I hate kids, especially slutty kids. I like it but the chapters are too short! I want more. :(

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I think, it's a good start. And boy, don't I know how Audrey feels.

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Pretty good start. I like this.

Author's Response: Glad you like it. [:

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i like the fangirl action as much as the next person, and this chapter was a little dull, but still good, im guessing it moves along the plot somehow. every story has a filler chapter, that the author uses just to move along the plot. its ok. still a wondeful story. 9/10

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Sam-loff, this was a very good chapter. It's very hard to write when you know you need to but you can't really . . . oh, you obviously know what I mean :) It is very difficult to come up with things, I know, and trust me, you did a marvelous job! For one, I'm really looking forward to finding out what Peeves wanted.

Really, the only criticism I have to offer has already been repeated to death - punctuation, punctuation, punctuation :)

Hugs, Al

Author's Response: Lol, I think next chapter (*cough*whichisn'tevenstarted*cough*) Peeves'll pull his big prank. Although, I doubt it'll be that great. Buuttt, I want to put more Sirius/Audrey interaction next chapter too. Whenever I get aroudn to writing it. Thanks again! You are a reviewing machine!

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Actually, it's a rather nice length ^^/ But this . . . this was just wow. I am literally on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter (well, the sixth, really, but I'm waiting to read the fifth).

Still with the punctuation thing! I think this just about sums it up: ‘Nice going Audrey.’ I thought to myself ‘You’ve really. . .’ ought to be >‘Nice going Audrey,’ I thought to myself. ‘You’ve really. . .’ I'm picky, I know :)

Hugs, Al

Author's Response: Oh, geez. It'll probably let you down. I'm pretty good that way, I'll have myself a nice cliffhanger, and then I totally ruin it next chapter. My grammer is horrible, I tell you. [: Thanks for yet another review!!

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Well, this was very much better lengthwise! It was very amusing, and I'm glad there was some conflict between Lily and Audrey - I really don't enjoy stories where the only confrontations are between, say, the main character and her hated rival from the opposite House whom she really has a smoldering love for without knowing it until he romantically kisses her in front of the entire school. [/rant] Also, your depiction of people here is v. v. accurate, fangirls especially ^^/

For the punctuation - “Oh.” The girl said. ought to be “Oh,” the girl said., and “Hey” came Sirius’s reply ought to be “Hey,” came Sirius’s reply. Those are only examples, by the way :)

Once again, 9/10.

Hugs, Al

Author's Response: Haha, I also haaatttee the mary-sue stories. Thats why I try to make mine non-Mary-Sue. I may have exagerated on some people, but I do try and keep Audrey as normal as possible. Thank you!

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You have a quite a few punctuation errors, and one for capitalization - Transfiguration - but other than that, it's nearly perfect.

This was a very lovely chapter, and I like it very much; I think it deserves a 9/10 :) My prediction for the story so far: Audrey pairs up with Sirius, and Lily pairs up with James [really?!]

Hugs, Al

Author's Response: Lol, nooo! What made you guess that! :o Maybe I'll switch it around and dooo.. Audrey/Dumbledore, Sirius/Ms.Norris, Lily/Giant Squid annnnd James/himself. That would be an interesting story. [: Thanks for the review!

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Wonderful chapter! However, one of the things I noticed was that you spelled bawling 'balling', and the last sentence doesn't quite make sense - I believe there might be a word or two missing?

Apart from that, I know I am definitley going to enjoy this story. It's interesting, it's different, and, like 'fangirl-ism', it sucks you in, but in a different, more positive way. I look forward to the next four chapters :)

Hugs, Al

Author's Response: Lol, I know, I'm a grammer-killer. [: I like the writing part, but not the grammer/spelling/thinking part. ^_^ Thanks for the review!

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I liked this chapter!! please update soon *pleading face* I'm addicted, and I need to know more... now!!! *heh* good story =)

Author's Response: Lol, great to know. I know the addicted feeling, I read a ton of fiction. Thanks for the review!

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OMGOSH!

Luvs,
Becca

Author's Response: That's probably the best review I've got, ever. [ : Lmao, thanks for the review.


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Ha ha ha! I love Audrey! This is fantastic writting!

Luvs,
Becca

Author's Response: Thank youu. I love her too. Thanks for reviewing.

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Hey, don't be so hard on yourself, I actually enjoyed this piece of writing and can't wait until you update again. Keep up the great job!!!

Author's Response: Lol, it's a bad habit, I'll write something, and then be like "nope, don't like it" I'm weird like that. Thank you very much!

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I like it!! Update soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'll try and update as soon as possible.

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... they're short. Sorry! Make'm longer and more interesting with much more jokes and pranks and "action" between Aud and Siri. KK?

Author's Response: Oh, oh, oh, there will be more action. I sound like a creep, don't I. Lolll, I was hoping for the next chapter to be the 'flirting' one. Thanks for the review!

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... it's a bit short. Anyway, it's nice 2 read. Most definitely going down in my top thirty list.

Author's Response: Thank you! I know, I'm terrible with short chapters. Working on it! Keep reviewing!

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It's okay to have a filler chapter here and there. I just hope next chapter has more Audrey + Sirius in it. heheh. Like them flirting ahahha. Anyways great job

Author's Response: Awweh, thank youu! Yes, there will def. be more Aurius. Woot, I've made myself a joined couple name! Lol, keep reviewing!

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So far, I like it! IT's great, she's witty, she's snappy, and she's so very strong willed that it's great to see the Muarders have finally met someone immune to their charms.... somewhat ^.^. Lol. Keep it up and grat job! And, sometimes there needs to be a break from the drama to make a good story... well... good ^.^. Never down play the "boring" or "poorly written" chapters, sometimes, they are very much needed. I cannot wait to read more.

Author's Response: Lol, thank you very much. I was really worried with that chapter. I did develop Audrey as a very strong girl, but it will be challenged in later chapters. Keep reading!

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I'm putting this on my favourites, it's hilarious, but I'm getting annoyed with the really short chapters! :-( Update soon and please write more!
10/10 cos I can't stop laughing.

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad it made you laugh. I apoligize on behalf of those pesky short chapters. They are annoying to me too. Thanks for the review!

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